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Southern Rivers Fly Fishing
New Zealand
At Southern Rivers Fly Fishing, we pride ourselves on crafting unforgettable experiences that stay with our clients long after their trip ends. We cater to diverse anglers and adapt seamlessly to New Zealand’s ever-changing outdoor conditions. If needed, we provide flexible alternatives while maintaining clear communication to align with your preferences.
Our mission is to introduce people to the outdoor lifestyle and art of fly fishing with ease. Our skilled, knowledgeable guides foster a friendly and relaxed atmosphere, prioritizing safety, reliability, flexibility, and trust.
Meet Jake Berry
A Wanaka native from the lower South Island, Jake Berry grew up surrounded by seasoned outdoorsmen. From childhood, he dreamed of becoming a professional fly fishing and hunting guide—a dream he pursued with unwavering dedication.
Over 20 years, Jake has honed his expertise, now serving as the owner and lead guide of Southern Rivers Fly Fishing. His passion for the wilderness and pursuit of New Zealand’s wild trout shines through in his work, delivering unparalleled fishing adventures.
- Two highly experienced guides
- Single or multi-day trips available
- Fly fish amidst New Zealand’s breathtaking landscapes
Expertise in These Species
Southern Rivers Fly Fishing specializes in targeting:
- Brown Trout
- Rainbow Trout
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