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Secrets of the Southwest: One Amazing Month Fly Fishing in Arizona
United States 鈥 Arizona | 119 min
Discover thousands of miles of cold, clear water winding through pine flats and red rock landscapes.
Channel: Fly All SZN
Video Summary
This fly fishing video captures the thrill of uncovering Arizona’s unexpected angling treasures. Contrary to its arid reputation, Arizona boasts lush, emerald-green waters rich with fish. The journey reveals hidden gems—from tiny mountain streams to deep canyon rivers—offering diverse fishing experiences.
Adventure comes with challenges. The rugged terrain, sharp angles, and cacti pose real dangers, including a close encounter with a mountain lion. Yet these obstacles only amplify the excitement. The angler and companions explore spots ranging from remote backcountry to easily accessible areas, each with unique appeal.
The video vividly conveys the joy of fly fishing in such varied landscapes, from catching native trout to larger non-native species. It also emphasizes the importance of preparation and physical endurance for backcountry expeditions.
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Fliegenfischerschule Ebert
Germany
As a certified FFI/EFFA fly-casting instructor, Peter Ebert brings extensive knowledge and experience to his fly-fishing seminars and courses, tailored to all skill levels and interests.
Starter Courses
Ideal for beginners or those refining foundational skills, these courses cover fly-fishing essentials—from casting techniques to fly selection.
Advanced Courses
Designed for anglers who have mastered the basics and seek to elevate their skills.
Private Guiding & Personal Training
For a personalized experience, Peter offers one-on-one sessions to address your specific goals and needs.
Predator Courses
Learn to effectively target predatory fish species with specialized fly-fishing techniques.
Workshops & Lessons
- Predator fly-fishing workshops and guiding
- Spey casting lessons
Expertise in Target Species
Fliegenfischerschule Ebert specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown Trout
- Grayling
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
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Thierry Millot
France
Recognized as "Guide of the Year" by the renowned fishing magazine Pêches Sportives, Thierry has perfected his craft since 1975. Specializing in French nymphing, he has taught enthusiasts and led guided trips since 1998.
Expert Certification & Experience
Thierry holds a French national diploma certifying him as a professional fly fishing guide and instructor. With extensive experience in the rivers and lakes of Haute Loire, Ardèche, and Puy de Dome, he has also fished annually in Croatia, Bosnia, Slovenia, Sweden, and Wales since the late 1990s.
Tailored Fly Fishing Adventures
Your guided experience will take you to prime fishing locations, where you can target brown trout, grayling, and rainbow trout. Personalized courses are available to help you master or refine fly fishing techniques.
Harmony & Serenity
We prioritize a peaceful and harmonious atmosphere tailored to your needs. Day trips in France accommodate 1–2 anglers, while European adventures welcome small groups of 3–4.
- 5,000 km of trout rivers accessible
- Fly tier since 1975
- Guided trips range from individual to customized family experiences
Expertise by Species
Thierry Millot specializes in fly fishing for:
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Jason Bethune
New Zealand
Raised in the Taupō region, Jason spent his childhood mastering fly fishing. With 30 years of experience, he knows every hidden gem in Taupō’s waters. In 2010, he fulfilled his dream by becoming the owner and guide of TroutBeck Fishing Lodge.
A passionate, friendly, and professional guide, Jason believes fly fishing is about more than just catching fish—though you’re guaranteed success. His goal is to create unforgettable trips, teaching clients how to find fish and sharing expert techniques. His unmatched knowledge of seasonal patterns and unique fly designs ensures success. A backcountry enthusiast, Jason loves exploring untouched waters where fish are unaccustomed to humans.
Book a trip with Jason for a once-in-a-lifetime experience and discover why many call him the "Trout Whisperer."
New Zealand Professional Fly Fishing Guide Association Member
As a member of the New Zealand Professional Fly Fishing Guides Association, Jason offers exceptional guided trips—from alpine streams to coastal rivers and lakes. Whether you need fly-tying tips or gear recommendations, he provides personalized advice. All association members uphold the highest ethical standards, ensuring a professional and memorable experience.
Trips from the Alps to the Sea
- Suitable for all skill levels, from beginners to experts
- In-depth knowledge of prime fishing locations and timing
Expertise in These Species
Jason specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
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Upstream Fly Fishing
Switzerland
Greetings, I’m Pascal Zeller. My deep passion for fly fishing has become my profession. Based near Interlaken, nestled in the breathtaking Swiss Alps, I operate in a region renowned for its stunning landscapes and diverse waterways.
Switzerland’s Allure
Our picturesque country captivates visitors worldwide with its natural beauty. Switzerland boasts an abundance of pristine waters—crystal-clear rivers, deep lakes, and secluded mountain streams—making it a paradise for anglers. A common question is: Does Switzerland offer fly fishing opportunities? The answer is a resounding yes! With diverse options for all skill levels, Switzerland’s fly fishing scene is exceptional.
Guided Fly Fishing Services
I offer guided fly fishing tours across Switzerland’s immaculate waters. Whether you seek high-altitude alpine trout, pike in our abundant lakes, or the challenge of barbel (the "freshwater bonefish") with deep nymphs, there’s something for everyone. Dry-fly chub fishing is another thrilling option.
About Upstreamflyfishing
Founded in 1998, Upstreamflyfishing was among Switzerland’s first fishing outfitters. Today, we cater to both beginners and seasoned anglers with a range of tailored services.
Our Services
- Fly fishing lessons for beginners
- Corporate/group fishing events for team bonding
- Guided expeditions across Switzerland for experienced anglers
Experiences to Enjoy
- Alpine trout fishing
- Pike fly fishing in Swiss lakes
- Barbel and chub fishing
- Beginner-friendly lessons
- Group/company fishing events
Target Species Expertise
Upstream Fly Fishing specializes in:
- Barbel
- Brown Trout
- Chub
- Grayling
- Pike
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New Zealand Fly Fishing Guide
Finding the perfect fishing tour in New Zealand can be overwhelming due to the abundance of online options. At our guide service, we simplify your search. As a born-and-raised local, Kevin combines his expertise, intimate knowledge of rivers, weather, and landowner relationships to ensure an exceptional experience. Booking an experienced, full-time independent guide like Kevin means fishing alongside the business owner—guaranteeing a shared commitment to your success.
About Kevin Payne: Your Expert Guide
When you choose our fly fishing service, you’re trusting a true professional. Here’s a glimpse of Kevin’s credentials:
- Executive Member of NZPFGA (since 1998)
- Born and raised in the Central South Island
- Three-term councilor on the Central South Island Fish & Game Council
- Contributing photographer for the book The Hunt
- Creator of customized, "top-secret" flies
Guided Fly Fishing: Your Tailored Experience
Enjoy a personalized fly fishing tour designed around your preferences and holiday plans. Key details:
- Season: Tours run from 1 October to 30 April (limited year-round options available).
- Non-anglers welcome: Partners, spouses, and children can join to ensure everyone enjoys the trip.
- Convenient packages: Tours can start from Christchurch Airport or your hotel.
- Premium accommodations: Relax at top-quality B&Bs, lodges, and farm stays after a day on the river.
Why Choose Us?
- Experienced, full-time independent guide
- Custom "top-secret" flies crafted by Kevin
- Comfortable, high-quality accommodations
Expertise in Target Species
We specialize in fly fishing for:
- Brown Trout
- Rainbow Trout
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