The Infinite Rainbow: A Masterclass on Nature’s Most Mesmerizing Light
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The Endless Journey: A Masterclass on Deep Rainbows
New Zealand
60 min
Hans and Cory embark on a demanding hike for an unforgettable fly fishing adventure, mastering Euro nymphing and landing massive rainbow trout amidst New Zealand’s breathtaking scenery.
Channel: Mike Kirkpatrick
Video Summary
In this fly fishing expedition, Hans and Cory traverse rugged terrain to reach a secluded backcountry river. Hans admits to Cory that the hike’s difficulty was underestimated, as they haul heavy packs up steep slopes. Despite the physical toll, the journey proves immensely rewarding, creating lasting memories.
The video captures their second-day fishing session, featuring Cory Scott—an 11-time national fly fishing champion—showcasing his skills. The focus turns to Euro nymphing, a technique new to Hans but quickly mastered under Cory’s mentorship. They delve into the method’s intricacies, highlighting its superiority in fast, deep waters where traditional indicator nymphing falls short.
As they explore the river, the pair confronts challenges like stealthy approaches to avoid startling fish and adapting techniques to varying water conditions. The stunning landscape—towering waterfalls and sweeping vistas—elevates the entire experience.
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