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Fly Fishing Factory
Switzerland
Our services are exclusively available in locations where we personally fly fish. We do not offer third-party guided tours or recommend unverified destinations. Choose between our workshops/tuition programs or personalized guiding services.
Whether in regulated or natural waters, we closely monitor water conditions to ensure an exceptional experience with high catch rates. Every offer includes a backup option.
We believe there’s a "right" fly for every situation—and consequently, a "wrong" one. Let us help you select the perfect fly for your chosen waters, or we can arrange custom patterns upon request.
For more details, visit www.bachtellachs.ch.
Fish "The Unicorn Among Salmonids": The BachtellachS®
- Tuition and guiding services available
- Stunning Swiss fishing locations
Expertise in Target Species
Fly Fishing Factory specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
- Grayling
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