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Fly Fishing Sicily
Italy
Discover the wild beauty of Sicily—home to stunning rivers, lakes, and the Mediterranean Sea. This diverse range of waters means an equally diverse array of fish. And of course, it’s all paired with la dolce vita: perfect weather, delicious food, and exceptional wines.
Fly Fishing Sicily is run by two passionate anglers who know these waters like the back of their hand. Whether you prefer small streams or saltwater fishing, get in touch to discuss your goals, and we’ll craft the perfect experience under the Sicilian sun.
Streams, Lakes & Saltwater Fishing
Combine la dolce vita with an unforgettable fly fishing adventure.
Expert Guidance for These Species
Fly Fishing Sicily specializes in:
- Brown Trout
- Rainbow Trout
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