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Solo Missions in New Zealand – A Fly Fishing Wonderland
New Zealand | 62 min
Join Mike from Latitude Guiding as he explores the breathtaking experience of fly fishing in New Zealand.
Video Summary:
In this fly fishing adventure, Mike shares his passion for tying custom flies, constantly adjusting patterns, colors, sizes, and weights to match varying conditions. He finds deep satisfaction in catching fish with his own creations, which he believes are subtler and more effective than store-bought flies. The video showcases his process of testing and refining fly designs, underscoring the importance of understanding the local ecosystem and fish behavior.
Mike also discusses tailoring flies for guided clients, demonstrating how small adjustments can dramatically improve their success. From large streamers to tiny ant patterns, he highlights the versatility and creativity required in fly fishing, proving that adaptability is key to mastering the craft.
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Spey Arms
Welcome to Spey Arms, your trusted guide to mastering Spey casting and salmon fishing in the heart of Scotland. Our mission is to help you discover the essence of Spey casting through hands-on lessons and in-depth courses.
Spey Casting Courses
Our Spey casting courses teach you proper techniques from the beginning, preventing bad habits that take years to correct. We provide a comprehensive learning experience, covering everything from reading the river and identifying prime pools to selecting the right rod, reel, and fly—even mastering how to hook, play, and land a salmon successfully.
Guided Salmon Fishing Trips
We offer guided salmon fishing trips on Scotland’s finest rivers. Unlike others restricted to a single beat, we operate on the most productive stretches of the River Tay, ensuring you experience the best salmon fishing Scotland has to offer.
Begin your journey with Spey Arms today for an unforgettable fly fishing adventure.
✓ Experience the beauty of Scottish salmon rivers
✓ Master Spey casting
✓ Contact Spey Arms now
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Peter Berggren
Sweden
Join us for a guided fishing experience in Sweden’s Stockholm Archipelago and Mälaren. At Peter Guide, we offer thrilling adventures in Stockholm’s stunning natural surroundings. Depending on the season and your preferences, we target sea trout, pike, zander, perch, cod, or salmon. Our year-round fishing trips ensure a dynamic and immersive experience for every client.
We specialize in personalized and engaging guided fishing tours. Our experienced guides will take you through Stockholm’s and Mälaren’s abundant waters, ensuring you get the most out of your adventure. No matter the season, we tailor our activities to suit your needs.
What We Offer:
- Target a variety of fish species
- Fish year-round in pristine waters
- Explore Sweden’s breathtaking archipelago
Expert Guidance for These Species:
Peter Berggren is a seasoned fly-fishing expert for:
- Atlantic Salmon
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
- Sea Trout
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We Fly Fish
At We Fly Fish, we believe the best fly fishers are those who have the most fun. Our goal is to help you enjoy this wonderful sport to the fullest. Whether you’re a beginner testing the waters or an experienced angler honing new skills, we’ll help you reach your potential. We’ve even guided clients from their first cast to expert-level adventures at the world’s finest fly-fishing destinations.
Fly fishing demands an understanding of the ecosystem, keen observation, and stealth. Success requires full focus on what’s happening underwater—and we’ll teach you how. Many newcomers find the sport’s tranquility and the thrill of the chase an irresistible combination.
Unique Fly Fishing Locations
We offer more diverse fly-fishing experiences than any other provider. Our handpicked locations range from serene chalk rivers to wild moorland streams, small lakes to the country’s largest still waters. Some spots are exclusive to us, ensuring a truly special experience.
Many of our waters are designated SSSIs (Sites of Special Scientific Interest), protecting rare flora and fauna. Whether you’re a novice or an expert, we have the perfect adventure for you.
We Fly Fish is a Wild Trout Trust Trade Member
- Family-friendly fishing days
- Guided lessons for all skill levels
- 26 exclusive UK locations
- Chalkstream fly fishing
Get in touch with We Fly Fish
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Pilve Fly Fishing
Finland
I am a 35-year-old fishing guide based in Pirkanmaa, specializing in fly fishing. With years of experience in both practice and instruction, I deeply understand the sport’s nuances. I hold a certified professional fishing guide qualification and am a member of the Finland Fishing Guide Guild. Additionally, I contribute fishing-related articles to publications like Nordic Fly Fisher magazine.
Partnerships
I partner with international companies, representing them in Finland as both a fly fisher and fly tier. My collaborations include English brands Veniard, Snowbee, and Fulling Mill, as well as the Italian company Stonfo.
Services Offered
Whether you’re a beginner eager to learn fly fishing or an experienced angler seeking to refine your skills, I’m happy to assist. My guiding services cover all aspects of fly fishing, including hands-on practice, theory, fly tying, fish biology, and more—helping you build expertise.
Ethical Practices
Respect for nature and fish is paramount in all fishing activities. I adhere strictly to local regulations, including quotas, restrictions, and etiquette toward fellow anglers. Pilve Fly Fishing enforces a zero-tolerance policy for alcohol and drugs to ensure everyone’s safety.
Services Available
- Certified guiding
- Workshops
- Fly tying
Expert Target Species
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- Asp
- Brook trout
- Brown trout
- Chub
- Grayling
- Ide
- Perch
- Rainbow trout
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Galddoaivi Safaris
Finland
Galddoaivi is an Arctic mountain in the heart of Finland’s largest wilderness—and the namesake of our company.
Since June 2017, we have led fishing and hiking excursions with a fresh, unique approach. We take pride in delivering high-quality fishing experiences on every trip.
We prioritize preserving fishing waters for future generations by maintaining healthy, diverse fish populations. To achieve this, we advocate releasing larger female fish and aim for a balanced catch across species. For us, fishing isn’t just about catching fish—it’s about sustainable food sourcing. Catch-and-release plays a key role in our selective practices.
Languages: English, Finnish
Services: Experienced Lapland fly fishing guide for trout, salmon, grayling, and pike.
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Galddoaivi Safaris specializes in fly fishing for:
- Atlantic Salmon
- Brown Trout
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