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Farquhar, Seychelles
16 min
This film follows a small group of fly fishers as they visit Farquhar Atoll in the Seychelles for the first time in over a year.
Channel: Fly Fishing Nation
Video Summary
This captivating fly fishing video immerses viewers in the rich marine life and thrilling adventures of Farquhar Atoll. Renowned among anglers, Farquhar boasts a diverse ecosystem with islands, channels, and vibrant marine habitats. The footage captures the excitement of fishing in this remote paradise, showcasing sharks, turtles, rays, and countless fish species.
The video highlights the anglers’ personal triumphs, including landing an Indo-Pacific permit—a prized catch—and encounters with bonefish, milkfish, and GTs. Farquhar’s varied terrain, from shallow flats to coral reefs and wrecks, further enhances its appeal.
A standout segment focuses on unexpected catches, underscoring the need for adaptability. The thrill of hooking a bumphead parrotfish and the struggle to reel in large fish offer a vivid glimpse into the challenges and rewards of fly fishing.
The video also emphasizes conservation, promoting sustainable practices like catch-and-release to protect the ecosystem for future generations. This commitment reflects a deep respect for preserving nature’s balance.
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De Rîves en Dérives
France 🇫🇷
Nicolas’s connection to fishing traces back to his childhood—a passion inherited not from his father or grandfather, but from his mother and grandmother. The rivers of Hérault and Tarn were his first classrooms, where he learned the art of fishing. Over 35 years later, his grandmother’s advice still guides him as he continues to refine his techniques.
Fly Fishing: A Way of Life
For Nicolas, fly fishing is more than a hobby; it’s a lifestyle. He has spent years mastering techniques like dry fly fishing, driven by a fascination with nature. Observing insect behavior, studying fish patterns, and analyzing how weather and geology affect fishing conditions are at the heart of his craft.
Guiding in Hérault: Fulfilling a Dream
Nicolas’s journey was shaped by two childhood passions: nature and sports. After completing his scientific education, he pursued degrees in social careers and sports management, eventually specializing in Outdoor Activities Management. Yet, he yearned to share his knowledge with others.
Turning Passion into Purpose
To make this dream a reality, Nicolas earned multiple certifications. He joined the training team at Creps de Montpellier, helping shape the next generation of outdoor leaders. Today, his favorite setting remains Hérault, where he guides fly fishers, shares his expertise, and showcases the region’s beauty through his guiding services.
Explore Stunning Rivers
- Master dry fly presentation techniques
- Expert guidance for targeting:
De Rîves en Dérives specializes in fly fishing for these species.
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Fly Fishing Factory
Switzerland
Our services are exclusively available in locations where we personally fly fish. We do not offer third-party guided tours or recommend unverified destinations. Choose between our workshops/tuition programs or personalized guiding services.
Whether in regulated or natural waters, we closely monitor water conditions to ensure an exceptional experience with high catch rates. Every offer includes a backup option.
We believe there’s a "right" fly for every situation—and consequently, a "wrong" one. Let us help you select the perfect fly for your chosen waters, or we can arrange custom patterns upon request.
For more details, visit www.bachtellachs.ch.
Fish "The Unicorn Among Salmonids": The BachtellachS®
- Tuition and guiding services available
- Stunning Swiss fishing locations
Expertise in Target Species
Fly Fishing Factory specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
- Grayling
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Pilve Fly Fishing
Finland
I am a 35-year-old fishing guide based in Pirkanmaa, specializing in fly fishing. With years of experience in both practice and instruction, I deeply understand the sport’s nuances. I hold a certified professional fishing guide qualification and am a member of the Finland Fishing Guide Guild. Additionally, I contribute fishing-related articles to publications like Nordic Fly Fisher magazine.
Partnerships
I partner with international companies, representing them in Finland as both a fly fisher and fly tier. My collaborations include English brands Veniard, Snowbee, and Fulling Mill, as well as the Italian company Stonfo.
Services Offered
Whether you’re a beginner eager to learn fly fishing or an experienced angler seeking to refine your skills, I’m happy to assist. My guiding services cover all aspects of fly fishing, including hands-on practice, theory, fly tying, fish biology, and more—helping you build expertise.
Ethical Practices
Respect for nature and fish is paramount in all fishing activities. I adhere strictly to local regulations, including quotas, restrictions, and etiquette toward fellow anglers. Pilve Fly Fishing enforces a zero-tolerance policy for alcohol and drugs to ensure everyone’s safety.
Services Available
- Certified guiding
- Workshops
- Fly tying
Expert Target Species
Pilve Fly Fishing specializes in fly fishing for:
- Asp
- Brook trout
- Brown trout
- Chub
- Grayling
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- Perch
- Rainbow trout
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Fly Fish Scotland
At Fly Fish Scotland, we’re passionate about fly fishing and sharing this love with others. Based in Perthshire, Scotland, we’re ideally positioned to guide you to some of the country’s most breathtaking locations. From the mainland to the islands, we offer access to private, exclusive fishing beats for an unparalleled experience.
Our guided trips take you to stunning highland lochs teeming with native brown trout and renowned rivers abundant with salmon and sea trout. Whether you’re a beginner or an expert, our professional guides—each with over 40 years of experience—will ensure an unforgettable adventure.
Why Choose Us?
- True Scotland experts
- Tackle, transport, and accommodation arranged
- Target species: salmon, sea trout, brown trout, grayling
Discover the magic of fly fishing in Scotland with us.
Get in touch with Fly Fish Scotland today!
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