Fishing Breaks
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Fishing Breaks offers angling on England’s most exclusive and prestigious chalkstreams. Founded over 30 years ago by Simon Cooper, the company embodies his passion for fly-fishing and dedication to these world-renowned rivers.
The British Isles are home to over 85% of the world’s chalkstreams—ecologically unique and biodiverse river systems. Raised in Hampshire, Simon grew up surrounded by exceptional fly-fishing opportunities but recognized their limited accessibility beyond a select few. Armed with just a telephone and a network of contacts, he set out to change this.
“My mission then and now is simple: to make the finest beats accessible to all while elevating professionalism in fly-fishing. Above all, we honor these chalkstreams as among the world’s most precious trout rivers.”
— Simon Cooper
Exclusive Fly Fishing on the River Test
Three decades on, Fishing Breaks remains a deeply personal business. Our tight-knit team of riverkeepers, guides, and anglers works tirelessly to deliver the UK’s finest chalkstream experiences. We’ve fished every yard of our rivers and maintain close relationships with owners and keepers from our base at Nether Wallop Mill in the heart of the Test Valley. We’d love to hear about your adventures.
- Founded in 1990
- The definitive chalkstream specialists
- Access to unparalleled waters
Get in touch with Fishing Breaks
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