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Fly Fishing Chile’s River of Dreams for Brown Trout
Channel: Jensen Fly Fishing
Duration: 108 min
Chile’s Blanco River offers one of the most remote and unique wilderness fly fishing expeditions for brown trout.
Video Summary
This fly fishing video takes viewers on an exhilarating journey to the River of Dreams base camp in southern Chile. The adventure begins with a horseback ride and a jet boat trip to the cabin camp on the Blanco River. The expedition features exceptional sight fishing opportunities in a maze of weedy spring creeks. Initially intimidated by the horses, the participants soon embrace the experience, awed by the breathtaking landscapes and abundant wildlife.
As they trek through dense forests, their excitement grows, heightened by the floral fragrances and vibrant canopies of flowers. The video captures their fly fishing exploits, including the thrill of hooking fish in challenging spots like tight backwaters and beneath logs. They successfully lure fish using various fly patterns, such as beetles and dragonflies.
The journey continues with an exploration of the Bongo River, where they immerse themselves in lush forests and pursue brown trout with mice patterns, despite tough conditions. The anglers share their techniques, including black torpedo hunting and streamer fishing, showcasing their skill and passion.
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Journey on the Fly
As a devoted fly angler, my life is enriched by more than just this passion. I am also a husband, father, and seeker of truth, beauty, and goodness. Fly fishing teaches profound life lessons, and the pursuit of trout inevitably leads to some of the planet’s most stunning landscapes.
The idea for Journey on the Fly Guide Service took shape years ago as I sought to deepen my skills—not just for personal fulfillment but to share what I’ve learned with others. Joining me on the water, you might find my son, always eager to help, and a team of guides tailored to your group’s needs.
What sets us apart is our philosophy: On trout streams, we are all visitors. My role is to serve as a bridge between you, our guests, and the stream’s natural inhabitants. My humble goal is to inspire others to discover and pursue their own purpose.
Credentials & Experience
- Master Watershed Steward and member of Fly Fishing Team USA
- Mentor for The Mayfly Project (WV Chapter), passing on my passion to the next generation
- B.S. in Religion (Minor in Bible, Liberty University)
- 20+ years of fly fishing experience, including the creation of the Micro-Master Class on Fly Fishing
- Current Projects: Developing a casting instruction and guide mentoring program, as well as coordinating Cross the Divide PA—a testament to my commitment to the fly fishing community
Remember, it’s not just the destination but the journey that shapes us.
Why Choose Us?
✔ 20+ years of fly fishing expertise
✔ Pennsylvania’s most beautiful trout streams
Get in touch with Journey on the Fly today!
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Bamboo Rods (Guide) – Switzerland
Embark on an extraordinary fly fishing journey in the Bernese Oberland with a local guide by your side.
The Splendor of Alpine Fly Fishing
Nestled in the heart of majestic mountains, this region boasts pristine streams and lakes teeming with trout. Our deep expertise in fly fishing and intimate knowledge of local waters will lead you to the best spots, ensuring a truly unique high-alpine experience.
We recommend booking early, as day tickets are limited to protect our carefully managed natural waters.
Book a Guided Fishing Experience
Contact us if you’re looking for a fly fishing guide or want more details about fishing opportunities in the region.
Discover Majestic Alpine Fly Fishing
Fish with a true local who grew up exploring these waters.
Also available: Handcrafted spliced bamboo fly rods by a skilled rod maker.
Expert Advice for These Species
Bamboo Rods (Guide) specializes in fly fishing for:
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Fly Fishing Adventures in New Zealand
With the raw splendor of New Zealand’s South Island as your backdrop, let expert guide Dean Harrison lead you on an extraordinary fly fishing adventure. Experience world-class trout fishing across Canterbury and the South Island, with guided trips on rivers and lakes tailored to your preferences.
Meet Your Guide: Dean Harrison
"Having fished since childhood, I’ve gained invaluable expertise over the years." My goal is to deliver the ultimate trip—combining exceptional fishing, breathtaking scenery, and unforgettable memories. Whether you’re a hardcore adventurer seeking remote challenges or prefer serene lakeside evenings, I cater to all skill levels and group types, including individuals, families, and special events. Choose between tent or cabin accommodations, and enjoy diverse fishing experiences—from river walks to lakeshore casting or inflatable boat fishing. Crafting these moments for you is my greatest joy.
Explore Canterbury’s Natural Beauty
Journey through Canterbury’s stunning alpine landscapes, Southern Alps forests, and braided rivers teeming with trout. Along the way, encounter diverse wildlife and even hunting opportunities. Prepare to land some of New Zealand’s largest fish!
Plan Your Perfect Fly Fishing Adventure
Your adventure can be as relaxed or challenging as you desire. I welcome everyone—from beginners to seasoned anglers—and provide top-tier Sage rods and gear at no extra cost if you prefer not to bring your own. Contact me today to begin your journey!
Options include:
- River walks to lakeshore fishing
- Guided trips for all skill levels
- Complimentary gear provided
Expertise in Target Species
Fly Fishing Adventures specializes in:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
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Hemmingway’s Fishing
Since 1993, we’ve offered guided fishing trips and fly-casting lessons to individuals, groups, and corporate clients in England’s stunning Lake District. Our catch-and-release excursions target salmon, sea trout, wild brown trout, pike, charr, and perch. You might have spotted us on TV with Matt Hayes or in the BBC series Mortimer and Whitehouse: Gone Fishing on Derwentwater.
We specialize in fishing the Lake District’s tranquil waters, with access to exclusive, high-quality spots where we often have the water to ourselves. As seasoned anglers, we know which locations yield the best catches and can ensure a memorable day amid breathtaking scenery.
- Operating since 1993
- The UK’s Lake District experts
- Access to exclusive waters
- Endorsed by Guideline
Contact Hemmingway’s Fishing today!
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Galddoaivi Safaris
Finland
Galddoaivi is an Arctic mountain in the heart of Finland’s largest wilderness—and the namesake of our company.
Since June 2017, we have led fishing and hiking excursions with a fresh, unique approach. We take pride in delivering high-quality fishing experiences on every trip.
We prioritize preserving fishing waters for future generations by maintaining healthy, diverse fish populations. To achieve this, we advocate releasing larger female fish and aim for a balanced catch across species. For us, fishing isn’t just about catching fish—it’s about sustainable food sourcing. Catch-and-release plays a key role in our selective practices.
Languages: English, Finnish
Services: Experienced Lapland fly fishing guide for trout, salmon, grayling, and pike.
Expertise:
Galddoaivi Safaris specializes in fly fishing for:
- Atlantic Salmon
- Brown Trout
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