The River Runs Through Him: The Untold Story of Joe Humphreys
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Live the Stream: The Story of Joe Humphreys
United States · Pennsylvania · 92 min
Live the Stream tells the inspiring life story of Joe Humphreys, Pennsylvania’s fly fishing legend—a man born to fly fish, devoted to teaching, and committed to fostering respect for local waters.
Channel: Gravitas Beyond Limits
Summary:
This documentary follows the remarkable journey of Joe Humphreys, an 86-year-old fly fishing icon from central Pennsylvania. Joe reflects on his lifelong passion for the sport, which began at age six, sharing personal and professional anecdotes that reveal its profound impact on his life.
The film explores Joe’s early years, including his childhood and education, while delving into his unique approach to fly fishing—an art he describes as mimicking insects with fur and feathers rather than using live bait. Beyond fishing, his story is one of perseverance, mentorship, and environmental advocacy.
Joe emphasizes respecting nature and practicing proper fish handling, particularly catch-and-release. He also discusses his teaching career, his influence on students, and his efforts to promote fly fishing through various platforms.
A key focus is Joe’s dedication to conservation, notably his work to protect and restore local streams like Spring Creek. These efforts underscore his commitment to environmental stewardship and the vital role of clean water for ecosystems and communities.
The documentary also reveals Joe’s personal side, including reflections on family and the loss of his wife, Gloria. These moments paint him not just as a fisherman, but as a deeply compassionate and introspective individual.
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