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Into the Wild: Fly Fishing Alaska’s Pristine Waters for 7 Days

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A Week of Fly Fishing in Alaska
United States → Alaska
48 min

This film documents our week-long Alaskan adventure as we attempt to catch seven fish species on fly rods.

Channel: Wild Fly Productions

Video Summary
In this video, a fishing enthusiast embarks on a dream trip to Alaska, famed for its abundant salmon and trout. It showcases the pristine beauty of one of North America’s most untouched fishing destinations.

The journey begins in Anchorage, where the group meets Alex, a former employee of All Alaska Outdoors. They traverse the stunning Cook Inlet, marveling at Alaska’s "happy little trees" and unspoiled wilderness.

Their base is All Alaska Outdoors, a premier fishing lodge on Longmere Lake, operated by Dr. Bob Leta—a physician, guide, and pilot. Dr. Bob shares his journey from Texas to Alaska and his dream of building a fishing lodge.

The group targets seven fish species, aiming for the "June Slam." They fish in diverse locations, some accessible by boat, others by floatplane, catching rainbow trout, Dolly Varden, lake trout, and more.

Highlights include fishing in remote areas, witnessing salmon migrations, and the thrill of landing fish in Alaska’s untouched waters. The solitude and challenge of these remote spots add to the adventure.

The video captures Alaska’s breathtaking scenery, from aerial floatplane views to serene fishing landscapes. The wilderness’s majesty is a recurring theme.

Evenings are spent enjoying the lodge’s sauna and swapping stories with fellow anglers, fostering camaraderie in this tranquil setting.

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    5. A Week of Fly Fishing in Alaska

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Hooked on Fly Fishing

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Hooked on Fly Fishing
The Netherlands

My name is Hans Bock, and I’ve been passionate about fly fishing for over 40 years. Through HOFF, I offer fly-tying courses, casting workshops, guided fly-fishing trips, and expert instruction. During the summer, I serve as head guide for SouthGreenlandFlyFishing in Iceland and Greenland.

Hooked on Fly Fishing

I’ve fly-fished across the globe, including in Montana, Wyoming, Utah, Idaho, British Columbia, the Bahamas, Argentina, Chile, New Zealand, England, Austria, Slovenia, the Czech Republic, Germany, Belgium, France, Italy, Denmark, Sweden, Finland, Norway, Iceland, and Greenland.

My credentials include:

  • Publishing 100+ articles in fishing magazines.
  • Completing the Dutch Fly Fishing Association’s casting instructor training.
  • Representing the Netherlands at the 2008 World Fly Fishing Championships in New Zealand.

Whether you’re a beginner or an advanced angler, I’ll help you master new techniques or guide you on unforgettable fly-fishing adventures in pristine nature. My goal? To make your experience as fun and rewarding as possible!

Quick Facts:

  • 100+ articles written
  • Fluent in Dutch (native) and English
  • Fly-fished in 20+ countries
  • Conducted 300+ workshops

Expertise in Fly Fishing for These Species:

  • Arctic Char
  • Asp
  • Atlantic Salmon
  • Barbel
  • Bream
  • Perch
  • Pike
  • Pike-perch
  • Rainbow Trout
  • Roach
  • Sea Bass
  • Sea Trout
  • Twaite Shad

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Guides

Yves Faillenet

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Yves Faillenet

Yves Faillenet | France

Achieve rapid progress and reach your fishing goals with a qualified, experienced guide. Explore stunning fishing spots on rivers, lakes, and ponds.

Full equipment is provided and included in the service, along with transfers to fishing locations in a suitable vehicle.

Learn specialized techniques from your instructor:

  • Fly fishing courses for all levels
  • Trout lure fishing courses
  • Nymph (natural bait) trout fishing courses
  • Predator lure or streamer (fly) fishing courses
  • Workshops and guided sessions for beginners to experts

Introductory Fly Fishing Workshop
For newcomers, this workshop covers:

  • Equipment overview
  • Basic casting techniques
  • Fly targeting and placement
  • Leader setup, knots, and connections
  • Presentation methods (upstream, cross-stream, downstream)
  • Approach strategies
  • Entomology basics (insect study)
  • Essential fly patterns

Advanced Training
For experienced anglers, refine your knowledge and technique through a blend of theory and hands-on practice.

Additional Offerings

  • Fly-tying courses
  • Decades of experience across dozens of scenic locations

Target Species Expertise
Yves Faillenet specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Brown trout
  • Pike
  • Grayling

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Guides

She’s Fly

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She’s Fly

At She’s Fly, we take a unique approach to outdoor gear and guiding. We specialize in high-quality gear designed by women, for women, ensuring comfort and support for every adventure.

Our Founders’ Stories

Dylan’s Journey

Dylan, our owner and co-founder, discovered her passion for fishing in 2010—a way to honor the memory of her late husband, Tony. The solace and joy she found in fly fishing inspired her to address the lack of gear tailored for women. This led her to co-found She’s Fly with Emily, driven by a shared vision of inclusivity in outdoor sports.

Beyond She’s Fly, Dylan works as an Agile Solutions Architect while balancing her love for nature, music, travel, and time with her pets and loved ones in Fort Collins, CO.

Emily’s Path

Emily, co-founder of She’s Fly, embodies the spirit of the Colorado mountains. A lifelong advocate for preserving National Parks and Public Lands, she has always defied expectations through her adventurous pursuits.

Her passion for fly fishing reflects her love for the outdoors and her commitment to challenging industry norms that overlook women’s needs. Alongside Dylan, she empowers others to pursue their passions without limits.

Outside work, Emily enjoys spontaneous adventures, time with her dogs, and immersing herself in nature’s beauty.

What We Offer

  • Fly fishing in small, intimate groups
  • Clinics and events for all skill levels

Get in touch with She’s Fly today!

She's Fly

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Fly Fishing Sicily

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Fly Fishing Sicily
Italy

Discover the wild beauty of Sicily—home to stunning rivers, lakes, and the Mediterranean Sea. This diverse range of waters means an equally diverse array of fish. And of course, it’s all paired with la dolce vita: perfect weather, delicious food, and exceptional wines.

Fly Fishing Sicily is run by two passionate anglers who know these waters like the back of their hand. Whether you prefer small streams or saltwater fishing, get in touch to discuss your goals, and we’ll craft the perfect experience under the Sicilian sun.

Streams, Lakes & Saltwater Fishing
Combine la dolce vita with an unforgettable fly fishing adventure.

Expert Guidance for These Species

Fly Fishing Sicily

Fly Fishing Sicily specializes in:

  • Brown Trout
  • Rainbow Trout

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