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Fly Fishing Chile’s River of Dreams for Brown Trout
Channel: Jensen Fly Fishing
Duration: 108 min
Chile’s Blanco River offers one of the most remote and unique wilderness fly fishing expeditions for brown trout.
Video Summary
This fly fishing video takes viewers on an exhilarating journey to the River of Dreams base camp in southern Chile. The adventure begins with a horseback ride and a jet boat trip to the cabin camp on the Blanco River. The expedition features exceptional sight fishing opportunities in a maze of weedy spring creeks. Initially intimidated by the horses, the participants soon embrace the experience, awed by the breathtaking landscapes and abundant wildlife.
As they trek through dense forests, their excitement grows, heightened by the floral fragrances and vibrant canopies of flowers. The video captures their fly fishing exploits, including the thrill of hooking fish in challenging spots like tight backwaters and beneath logs. They successfully lure fish using various fly patterns, such as beetles and dragonflies.
The journey continues with an exploration of the Bongo River, where they immerse themselves in lush forests and pursue brown trout with mice patterns, despite tough conditions. The anglers share their techniques, including black torpedo hunting and streamer fishing, showcasing their skill and passion.
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Fliegenfischerschule Ebert
Germany
As a certified FFI/EFFA fly-casting instructor, Peter Ebert brings extensive knowledge and experience to his fly-fishing seminars and courses, tailored to all skill levels and interests.
Starter Courses
Ideal for beginners or those refining foundational skills, these courses cover fly-fishing essentials—from casting techniques to fly selection.
Advanced Courses
Designed for anglers who have mastered the basics and seek to elevate their skills.
Private Guiding & Personal Training
For a personalized experience, Peter offers one-on-one sessions to address your specific goals and needs.
Predator Courses
Learn to effectively target predatory fish species with specialized fly-fishing techniques.
Workshops & Lessons
- Predator fly-fishing workshops and guiding
- Spey casting lessons
Expertise in Target Species
Fliegenfischerschule Ebert specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown Trout
- Grayling
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
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Robfish | New Zealand
Embark on an unforgettable fly fishing adventure with Rob Vaz, an accredited NZPGFA professional guide. A former NZ National Fly Fishing Champion and international representative, Rob brings decades of expertise to trout fishing expeditions in the Central North Island. Raised in the Waikato region, he has explored premier fly fishing locations across New Zealand and beyond.
With a competitive background representing New Zealand, Rob has mastered cutting-edge techniques to ensure a successful and rewarding experience for anglers of all levels. Whether you’re a beginner or an expert, he is committed to making your day on the water both enjoyable and educational. Let Rob—a distinguished member of the NZ Professional Guides Association—elevate your fly fishing journey.
Dive into Fly Fishing or Czech/Euro Nymphing
Under Rob’s guidance, you’ll learn the essentials of fly fishing or delve into Czech/Euro nymphing—a technique he pioneered long before it gained mainstream popularity. His deep immersion in European fly fishing, particularly Czech nymphing during the 1990s, made him one of its earliest adopters.
Though this method has been around for years, Rob is passionate about sharing its nuances with his clients. Not only does it increase your chances of landing fish, but it also adds an exciting new layer to your angling experience.
Why Choose Rob?
✔ Member of the NZ Professional Guides Association
✔ Czech/Euro Nymphing Specialist
✔ Expert Guide for Central North Island Waters
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Chappie Chapman
New Zealand
Chappie is one of New Zealand’s most respected fly fishing guides, a reputation earned through a lifelong passion for the sport. His angling journey began at six, but it was at thirteen that he first discovered the allure of fly-fishing. He grew up in a mountainous region dotted with over three hundred streams, most teeming with trout.
Chappie honed his skills in smaller streams, and to this day, his favorite moments involve dry-fly fishing in these intimate waters. In the mid-1970s, he made a bold decision: selling his possessions, quitting his job, and embarking on a three-and-a-half-year fishing expedition with a 4WD and a caravan. He firmly believes persistence is the key to mastery.
A 20-year member of the New Zealand Professional Fishing Guides Association (NZPFGA), Chappie now offers two-day Advanced Fly Schools as well as private one-on-one tuition in both single-handed and Spey casting. Soon, he plans to introduce three-day "On the Water" classes covering Advanced Fly Casting with single-handed rods and Spey Casting for both trout and single-handed setups.
Guiding Career & Industry Contributions
For over two decades, Chappie has turned his part-time passion into a full-time profession, guiding fellow anglers. He also spent years in the fishing tackle industry, working at both wholesale and retail levels. This experience allowed him to contribute to the design and development of some of today’s most sought-after fly-fishing tackle brands.
Expertise Highlights
- Decades of fly-fishing experience
- Two-day schools for beginners and intermediates
- Small-stream specialist
Target Species
Chappie Chapman specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
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Hookafly
At Hookafly, we share your passion for fly-fishing in nature’s pristine settings. We’ve handpicked the world’s finest fly-fishing destinations, and our expert guides bring global experience to every trip. Whether you’re a beginner or a seasoned angler, we’ll tailor your adventure to your preferences.
Our Goal
We’re committed to delivering the fly-fishing trip of a lifetime. By celebrating the landscapes we operate in and collaborating closely with local communities and wildlife, we ensure sustainable, immersive experiences. From chalk streams to international waters, every itinerary is designed for your enjoyment.
Locations
Our curated destinations span the UK and beyond, including Hampshire’s River Itchen and Test, Dorset’s River Frome, and Berkshire’s Kennet. These versatile rivers allow us to customize each day while showcasing England’s breathtaking scenery.
- Fly-fish England’s finest chalkstreams
- Target brown trout, grayling, and Atlantic salmon
- Access exclusive locations worldwide
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Hemmingway’s Fishing
Since 1993, we’ve offered guided fishing trips and fly-casting lessons to individuals, groups, and corporate clients in England’s stunning Lake District. Our catch-and-release excursions target salmon, sea trout, wild brown trout, pike, charr, and perch. You might have spotted us on TV with Matt Hayes or in the BBC series Mortimer and Whitehouse: Gone Fishing on Derwentwater.
We specialize in fishing the Lake District’s tranquil waters, with access to exclusive, high-quality spots where we often have the water to ourselves. As seasoned anglers, we know which locations yield the best catches and can ensure a memorable day amid breathtaking scenery.
- Operating since 1993
- The UK’s Lake District experts
- Access to exclusive waters
- Endorsed by Guideline
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