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Montana’s Ultimate Fly Fishing Expedition: 13 Days of Trophy Trout & Untamed Waters

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13-Day Fly Fishing Trip Through Montana
United States → Montana
Duration: 105 min

Join a group of friends on a 13-day fly fishing adventure in Montana as they pursue trout.
Channel: Wild Fly Productions

Video Summary
In this fly fishing video, a group of friends embarks on an adventurous journey after converting a 1993 short bus into a mobile basecamp for their trips. The bus serves as a home, gear storage, and a cozy retreat after long days on the water. Despite initial doubts about its durability, it proves reliable during a test run and a two-week road trip through Montana, traversing city streets, coastal breezes, and mountain peaks.

Preparing the bus for Montana presents challenges, including mechanical fixes and improvised solutions. The group sets off, exploring new regions and forging friendships along the way. Stops include Salt Lake City, last-minute errands, and an overnight stay at a 24-hour truck stop. The trip features fishing, scenic floats, occasional mishaps, and memorable moments like stocking up on beer at Big Sky Brewing Company.

Their experiences range from fishing small creeks to struggling with a faulty storage locker. Meticulous food planning, wildlife encounters, and unexpected repairs add to the adventure. While they enjoy successes—catching fish and navigating rough roads—they also face setbacks like equipment failures and poor fishing conditions.


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Anglers Jaunt

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Anglers Jaunt

At Anglers Jaunt, we offer luxury guided fly fishing experiences in Scotland. We recognize fly fishing’s profound impact on people’s lives and are passionate about sharing this exceptional activity—whether you’re a seasoned angler or trying it for the first time. Our hope is that your time with us sparks a lifelong love for the sport.

For experienced anglers, a knowledgeable guide can elevate your Scottish holiday, making your fishing time more efficient and enjoyable. That’s why we’re dedicated to delivering first-class, tailored services to create unforgettable memories. Whether you seek solitude or family-friendly outings, we customize every trip to match your preferences.

Why Choose Us?

  • Trout, salmon, and grayling fishing trips
  • Scotland experts with 20+ years of experience
  • Luxury options: private waters, private chefs
  • Family-friendly adventures

Get in touch with Anglers Jaunt today!


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De Rîves en Dérives

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De Rîves en Dérives


De Rîves en Dérives
France 🇫🇷

Nicolas’s connection to fishing traces back to his childhood—a passion inherited not from his father or grandfather, but from his mother and grandmother. The rivers of Hérault and Tarn were his first classrooms, where he learned the art of fishing. Over 35 years later, his grandmother’s advice still guides him as he continues to refine his techniques.

Fly Fishing: A Way of Life
For Nicolas, fly fishing is more than a hobby; it’s a lifestyle. He has spent years mastering techniques like dry fly fishing, driven by a fascination with nature. Observing insect behavior, studying fish patterns, and analyzing how weather and geology affect fishing conditions are at the heart of his craft.

Guiding in Hérault: Fulfilling a Dream
Nicolas’s journey was shaped by two childhood passions: nature and sports. After completing his scientific education, he pursued degrees in social careers and sports management, eventually specializing in Outdoor Activities Management. Yet, he yearned to share his knowledge with others.

Turning Passion into Purpose
To make this dream a reality, Nicolas earned multiple certifications. He joined the training team at Creps de Montpellier, helping shape the next generation of outdoor leaders. Today, his favorite setting remains Hérault, where he guides fly fishers, shares his expertise, and showcases the region’s beauty through his guiding services.

Explore Stunning Rivers

  • Master dry fly presentation techniques
  • Expert guidance for targeting:
    • Brown Trout
    • Grayling

De Rîves en Dérives specializes in fly fishing for these species.


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Catch the Fish

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Catch the Fish


Catch the Fish
Switzerland

Immerse yourself in Switzerland’s thrilling fishing world, waiting to be explored.

Pursuit of Trout

What could surpass a day spent hunting for Farios in pristine streams amid Europe’s finest landscapes? For an unmatched experience, I offer guided trips across Switzerland’s most productive fishing waters.

Adventure with Pike

Fishing for pike in Switzerland’s stunning mountain lakes is no ordinary pursuit. I’ll lead you to secluded spots teeming with these formidable predators.

Boat-Based Fishing

Using a boat or float tube unlocks access to untouched locations. Whether targeting pike, zander, perch, or roach, the possibilities are endless!

The Allure of Grayling

To some, grayling is the "naïve little cousin" of trout; to others, it’s a prized catch. As a fly-fishing enthusiast, I find it fascinating. This surface-feeding species fights hard—stay alert if you encounter a school, as your fly will face a real challenge!

Targeting Barbel

Brace for a thrilling chase when a barbel—Switzerland’s "freshwater bonefish"—strikes your nymph. These fish are a superb alternative when trout aren’t biting. Whether in summer’s heat or early spring’s chill, barbel are always ready to seize a nymph and bolt on a marathon run.

Target Species

  • Pike
  • Trout
  • Grayling
  • Barbel

Expert Advice for These Species

Catch the Fish specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Barbel
  • Grayling
  • Brown Trout
  • Pike

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Evening Rise Fly Fishing

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Evening Rise Fly Fishing
New Zealand

Welcome to an unforgettable fly fishing adventure in the heart of New Zealand’s Southland and Otago regions! I’m Mike Dennis, and I take great pride in showcasing the exceptional freshwater fishing opportunities here. Whether you’re looking for a short angling escape, a peaceful day on the water, or a multi-day expedition, I’ll tailor your trip to create memories that last a lifetime.

Meet Your Expert Guide

I’m Mike Dennis, a true New Zealander who fell in love with fly fishing at the age of 10. My journey began with catching eels by handline and the thrill of landing my first trout on a fly rod. Since then, my passion has taken me across New Zealand’s two main islands, the Cook Islands, Southeast Asia, Australia, and Canada’s Pacific Northwest. With 25 years of guiding experience in Southland (New Zealand’s Home of Brown Trout) and Otago, I’ve developed an intimate knowledge of these waters and their fish.

A Passion for Teaching

Beyond guiding, I love teaching fly fishing to anglers of all levels. Whether it’s setting up gear, mastering knots, refining casting techniques, or choosing the perfect fly, I’m here to share my expertise. From beginners to seasoned anglers looking to sharpen their skills, I cater to everyone. Join me for a day of fun, stunning scenery, crystal-clear water, and the excitement of sight-fishing rising trout.

Embark on a Unique Adventure

Let me introduce you to fly fishing for New Zealand’s spectacular brown trout. For an extra thrill, we can explore night fishing along lake edges and stream mouths. Imagine casting a mouse pattern (season permitting) or a streamer fly under a starry sky—this is when the "big boys" come out to play, where trophy trout lurk.

Your Safety Comes First

Evening Rise Fly Fishing

When you fish with me, you’re in safe hands. I hold a First Aid Field Qualification and serve as an Operational Team Member of Search and Rescue, backed by years of outdoor experience. I’m also a proud member of the New Zealand Professional Fishing Guides Association, ensuring I meet all industry standards for your peace of mind.

Book Your Fly Fishing Expedition

It’s time to discover New Zealand’s breathtaking lakes, rivers, and streams—and the magnificent trout that call them home. Contact me now to secure your spot and embark on an unforgettable journey. Let’s make your angling dreams a reality!

  • Lakes, rivers, and streams available
  • Adventurous night fly fishing available
  • Guiding and tuition for all levels

Expert Advice for These Species

Evening Rise Fly Fishing specializes in:

  • Brown trout
  • Rainbow trout

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Hookafly

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Hookafly
At Hookafly, we share your passion for fly-fishing in nature’s pristine settings. We’ve handpicked the world’s finest fly-fishing destinations, and our expert guides bring global experience to every trip. Whether you’re a beginner or a seasoned angler, we’ll tailor your adventure to your preferences.

Our Goal
We’re committed to delivering the fly-fishing trip of a lifetime. By celebrating the landscapes we operate in and collaborating closely with local communities and wildlife, we ensure sustainable, immersive experiences. From chalk streams to international waters, every itinerary is designed for your enjoyment.

Hookafly

Locations
Our curated destinations span the UK and beyond, including Hampshire’s River Itchen and Test, Dorset’s River Frome, and Berkshire’s Kennet. These versatile rivers allow us to customize each day while showcasing England’s breathtaking scenery.

  • Fly-fish England’s finest chalkstreams
  • Target brown trout, grayling, and Atlantic salmon
  • Access exclusive locations worldwide

Contact Hookafly today.


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