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Flytastic – Switzerland
From an early age, I was drawn to fishing—tying complex knots blindfolded and trying fly fishing by age 14. Despite balancing secondary school and a culinary apprenticeship in Appenzell, my passion for fishing never faded. After my career as a chef, I discovered joy in bartending and connecting with people. This period also marked the start of a profound personal journey.
The Crossroads of Passion and Profession
In 2015, armed with a vocational high school diploma and culinary training, I pursued hotel management studies. A transformative 2017 summer internship in Canada as a "Lodge Assistant Manager" at a fishing lodge deepened my love for fishing. Returning to Switzerland, I grappled with my future career path, growing increasingly uncertain about my studies.
Embracing the Call of the Wild
Completing my studies in spring 2020—coinciding with the COVID-19 lockdown—gave me time to fully immerse myself in fly fishing. I realized I wanted not just to fish but to share my knowledge and passion. Inspired, I began guiding others into nature, combining my cooking skills with unforgettable experiences. This led to the launch of FLYTASTIC, a free website where I shared my insights.
Turning Passion into Profession
By summer 2021, I embraced fly fishing as my profession. Through workshops, I now teach fly fishing techniques, water ecology, and respect for nature, aiming to inspire fellow anglers. It’s time to do what I love: fly fishing.
Workshops Offered:
- Fly fishing for beginners and pros
- Rod building
- Fly presentation techniques
Expertise in Targeting These Species:
Flytastic specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown Trout
- Grayling
- Pike
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- Corrected "blindfolded" (contextually odd) to "blindfolded" (if intentional) or rephrased.
- Fixed "Completing" (original had a typo: "completing").
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