Jura Aventure Pêche

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Jura Aventure Pêche
Switzerland

Born in the Vallée de Joux, I’ve been fishing since the age of 9 or 10 and know every fishing spot in the Vaud Jura intimately. Eager to explore new horizons, I’ve also fished extensively in Switzerland and abroad—particularly in France and Slovenia.

I am a certified Fly Fishing Instructor (Fédération Suisse de Pêche, FSP) and offer half- or full-day guided trips. I’ll take you to the best fishing locations and share expert advice to ensure a successful outing.

Claude Reverchon
FSP Fly Fishing Instructor
Half- and full-day guiding
Target species: Brown Trout, Grayling, Marble Trout, Rainbow Trout

Expert Advice for Fly Fishing
Jura Aventure Pêche specializes in fly fishing for:

• Brown Trout
• Grayling
• Marble Trout
• Rainbow Trout

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