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She’s On The Fly
New Zealand

Nestled in the lush South Island of New Zealand, Aotearoa is an angler’s paradise. Its crystal-clear streams, framed by dramatic mountains and native forests, draw fishers worldwide. The thrill of spotting and catching trophy trout has long made this region a magnet for enthusiasts—dubbed "Angler’s El Dorado" by Zane Grey.

Renowned for its world-class Brown and Rainbow Trout fisheries, the South Island offers unparalleled fly-fishing. Here, the combination of trophy-sized fish and breathtaking landscapes creates some of the planet’s finest angling opportunities.

Comprehensive Access to Prime Fishing Waters
Based in Christchurch, at the heart of the South Island, we provide access to hundreds of kilometers of exceptional waterways. From Nelson’s sunlit vistas to the snow-capped Southern Alps and the rainforest-cloaked valleys of the West Coast, our expeditions traverse this untamed wilderness.

Renowned Kiwi Hospitality & Unforgettable Experiences
As New Zealanders, we pride ourselves on warm hospitality and crafting personalized fly-fishing adventures. Beyond world-class angling, New Zealand offers award-winning wines, gourmet cuisine, and year-round adventure tourism.

Join Hannah for an Extraordinary Fishing Adventure
Hannah, a professionally registered NZPFGA guide, is eager to lead your pursuit of elusive backcountry trout. With her expertise and your passion, this journey will become a highlight of your fly-fishing legacy.

Hundreds of kilometers of pristine waterways
World-class fly-fishing opportunities
Tailored angling experiences

Expertise in Target Species
She’s On The Fly specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Brown Trout
  • Rainbow Trout

She's On The Fly

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