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The Endless Journey: A Masterclass on Deep Rainbows
New Zealand
60 min
Hans and Cory embark on a demanding hike for an unforgettable fly fishing adventure, mastering Euro nymphing and landing massive rainbow trout amidst New Zealand’s breathtaking scenery.
Channel: Mike Kirkpatrick
Video Summary
In this fly fishing expedition, Hans and Cory traverse rugged terrain to reach a secluded backcountry river. Hans admits to Cory that the hike’s difficulty was underestimated, as they haul heavy packs up steep slopes. Despite the physical toll, the journey proves immensely rewarding, creating lasting memories.
The video captures their second-day fishing session, featuring Cory Scott—an 11-time national fly fishing champion—showcasing his skills. The focus turns to Euro nymphing, a technique new to Hans but quickly mastered under Cory’s mentorship. They delve into the method’s intricacies, highlighting its superiority in fast, deep waters where traditional indicator nymphing falls short.
As they explore the river, the pair confronts challenges like stealthy approaches to avoid startling fish and adapting techniques to varying water conditions. The stunning landscape—towering waterfalls and sweeping vistas—elevates the entire experience.
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FishX
Whether you’re an avid angler or simply enjoy a casual fishing trip, FishX has something for everyone. From tourists visiting Scotland to business travelers or seasoned anglers seeking new experiences, we tailor fishing trips to suit your needs.
Located in central Scotland, we offer guided expeditions across Dumfries and Galloway, the Scottish Borders, Perthshire, and Argyll and Bute. Our trips take you to some of Scotland’s most stunning and renowned fishing spots, including the legendary Loch Leven, Loch Lomond, Loch Awe, and the Lake of Menteith. Target trout, pike, or perch—using either the fisheries’ boats or our fully equipped FishX vessels.
Specialties:
- Game, coarse, saltwater, and predatory fishing
- Pike fly-fishing experts
- Accessible angling options
Contact FishX today!
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Steve Cullen Fly Fishing
"Only the heart can truly appreciate the world’s finest and most breathtaking wonders—they transcend sight and touch."
Fly fishing is a captivating art that connects us with nature’s grandeur in the most fulfilling way. More than just a sport, it offers a peaceful escape from daily stresses, making it an invaluable retreat.
This simple yet profound pursuit has enthralled millions worldwide, creating lifelong devotees. Through this platform, I hope to share my passion and inspire others to discover fly fishing’s magic, just as I have.
Guidance and Instruction
I offer expert guidance at premier locations, including:
Midland Reservoirs:
- Rutland Water
- Grafham Water
- Pitsford Water
- Ravensthorpe
- Draycote Water
Derbyshire Rivers:
- River Derwent
- River Wye
- River Dove
- River Lathkill
Plus the Welsh River Dee and renowned Southern chalkstreams.
I specialize in diverse fly fishing techniques, providing up-to-date, practical advice to help you grow as an angler. If you have a specific location in mind, contact me—I’ll do my best to accommodate your needs. Whether stillwaters, reservoirs, or rivers, I’ll guide you to maximize your success.
- Fish stunning reservoirs and rivers
- Flies hand-tied by Steve available
- Experience legendary chalk streams
Get in touch with Steve Cullen Fly Fishing today!
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Steef Meijers
The Netherlands
With over 30 years of experience in fishing, Steef Meijers is a versatile angler who has explored countless waters across the Netherlands. A fly-fishing expert, he possesses extensive knowledge of the country’s diverse fishing spots. If you’re interested in fly fishing for predatory species like pike, pike-perch, and bass in the Netherlands, Steef’s deep expertise makes him the perfect guide.
- Speaks Dutch (native) and English (fluent)
- 30 years of experience
- Predatory fish specialist
Expertise in Target Species
Steef Meijers specializes in fly fishing for the following species:
- Asp
- Common Carp
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
- Sea Bass
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Pilve Fly Fishing
Finland
I am a 35-year-old fishing guide based in Pirkanmaa, specializing in fly fishing. With years of experience in both practice and instruction, I deeply understand the sport’s nuances. I hold a certified professional fishing guide qualification and am a member of the Finland Fishing Guide Guild. Additionally, I contribute fishing-related articles to publications like Nordic Fly Fisher magazine.
Partnerships
I partner with international companies, representing them in Finland as both a fly fisher and fly tier. My collaborations include English brands Veniard, Snowbee, and Fulling Mill, as well as the Italian company Stonfo.
Services Offered
Whether you’re a beginner eager to learn fly fishing or an experienced angler seeking to refine your skills, I’m happy to assist. My guiding services cover all aspects of fly fishing, including hands-on practice, theory, fly tying, fish biology, and more—helping you build expertise.
Ethical Practices
Respect for nature and fish is paramount in all fishing activities. I adhere strictly to local regulations, including quotas, restrictions, and etiquette toward fellow anglers. Pilve Fly Fishing enforces a zero-tolerance policy for alcohol and drugs to ensure everyone’s safety.
Services Available
- Certified guiding
- Workshops
- Fly tying
Expert Target Species
Pilve Fly Fishing specializes in fly fishing for:
- Asp
- Brook trout
- Brown trout
- Chub
- Grayling
- Ide
- Perch
- Rainbow trout
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Daniel Souchet
France
Join me, Daniel Souchet, your fly fishing guide and instructor, to learn and master the art of fly fishing. Whether you’re a beginner eager to catch your first fish or an experienced angler looking to refine your skills, I tailor each session to your needs and level.
Advanced Fishing Techniques
Already familiar with fly fishing but want to optimize your skills? Whether you struggle with casting in challenging conditions or need guidance on river or pond strategies, I’ll share insights from my 40 years of experience. Together, we’ll refine your casting technique, deepen your understanding of fish behavior, and identify the most productive fishing spots.
Nature Activities & Courses
My sessions cater to everyone—locals, families, and groups of friends. These nature-focused activities explore freshwater ecosystems, including fish species, their food chain, and the impact of human activity on aquatic environments. Children will learn fishing basics, from rod setup to practice, while experienced anglers can craft 4–5 custom flies in just 4 hours.
Boutique
My boutique features handcrafted, tested, and proven artificial flies. Custom orders are available to meet your specific requirements.
Why Choose Me?
- 24 years of experience in fly fishing instruction
- Workshops for all ages and group sizes, from individuals to kids
- Proven, high-quality artificial flies
Expert Target Species
Daniel Souchet specializes in fly fishing for:
- Chub
- Roach
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
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