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Montana’s Ultimate Fly Fishing Expedition: 13 Days of Trophy Trout & Untamed Waters

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13-Day Fly Fishing Trip Through Montana
United States → Montana
Duration: 105 min

Join a group of friends on a 13-day fly fishing adventure in Montana as they pursue trout.
Channel: Wild Fly Productions

Video Summary
In this fly fishing video, a group of friends embarks on an adventurous journey after converting a 1993 short bus into a mobile basecamp for their trips. The bus serves as a home, gear storage, and a cozy retreat after long days on the water. Despite initial doubts about its durability, it proves reliable during a test run and a two-week road trip through Montana, traversing city streets, coastal breezes, and mountain peaks.

Preparing the bus for Montana presents challenges, including mechanical fixes and improvised solutions. The group sets off, exploring new regions and forging friendships along the way. Stops include Salt Lake City, last-minute errands, and an overnight stay at a 24-hour truck stop. The trip features fishing, scenic floats, occasional mishaps, and memorable moments like stocking up on beer at Big Sky Brewing Company.

Their experiences range from fishing small creeks to struggling with a faulty storage locker. Meticulous food planning, wildlife encounters, and unexpected repairs add to the adventure. While they enjoy successes—catching fish and navigating rough roads—they also face setbacks like equipment failures and poor fishing conditions.


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Anglers Jaunt

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Anglers Jaunt

At Anglers Jaunt, we offer luxury guided fly fishing experiences in Scotland. We recognize fly fishing’s profound impact on people’s lives and are passionate about sharing this exceptional activity—whether you’re a seasoned angler or trying it for the first time. Our hope is that your time with us sparks a lifelong love for the sport.

For experienced anglers, a knowledgeable guide can elevate your Scottish holiday, making your fishing time more efficient and enjoyable. That’s why we’re dedicated to delivering first-class, tailored services to create unforgettable memories. Whether you seek solitude or family-friendly outings, we customize every trip to match your preferences.

Why Choose Us?

  • Trout, salmon, and grayling fishing trips
  • Scotland experts with 20+ years of experience
  • Luxury options: private waters, private chefs
  • Family-friendly adventures

Get in touch with Anglers Jaunt today!


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James Curley Fly Fishing

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James Curley Fly Fishing

Welcome to Out Fishing, the premier fly fishing guide service in the heart of the Scottish Highlands. Explore the rich landscapes of Wester Ross and Sutherland, home to Arctic char, sea trout, Atlantic salmon, and wild brown trout.

Location & Offerings

Nestled in Elphin along the NC500 route, we’re surrounded by legendary lochs like Cam, Veyatie, and Urigill. Whether you’re a beginner or an expert, our tailored experiences cater to all ages and skill levels. Immerse yourself in pristine fishing grounds teeming with wildlife, where spirited catches—including the elusive Atlantic salmon and sea trout—await.

Our Services

We offer guided days and personalized tuition for individuals, groups, families, and seasoned anglers. Every trip is carefully planned based on your preferences, weather conditions, and fishing opportunities.

Exclusive Fishing

For a truly unique experience, enjoy exclusive access to the Ledmore Estate, featuring:

  • Nearly 4 miles of river fishing on the Ledbeg and Ledmore
  • Bank and boat fishing on Lochs Cam and Urigill
  • James Curley Fly Fishing

  • Diverse geology supporting abundant fly hatches, ideal for all skill levels.

Join Out Fishing for an unforgettable fly fishing adventure in the Scottish Highlands.

Fly Fish the Scottish Highlands
Target: Arctic char, sea trout, Atlantic salmon, wild brown trout
Services: Guiding & workshops (individuals or groups)
Contact: James Curley Fly Fishing


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Wild Fly Fishing

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Wild Fly Fishing


Wild Fly Fishing

Meet Pete Buckey, a full-time fly fishing guide passionate about helping others catch wild fish. As a licensed Game Angling coach with a valid DBS and First Aid certification, Pete ensures a safe and rewarding experience for all. Based primarily in the UK, he specializes in the chalk stream rivers of Southern England, with growing demand for his services in Wales, Derbyshire, and Yorkshire. In his free time, Pete fishes the freestone rivers of Wales—a pastime that never feels like work.

At Wild Fly Fishing, we prioritize quality over qualifications. Our guides are not only fully certified but also trusted friends—seasoned anglers who excel even in challenging conditions. They tailor their approach to maximize your enjoyment, ensuring a fun, relaxed day on the water. We don’t just hire guides for their certificates; we choose individuals we truly respect and believe in.

Why Choose Us?

  • Year-round fly fishing
  • Expertise in chalk streams
  • Fully certified, trustworthy guides

Get in touch with Wild Fly Fishing today!


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The Durham Fly Fishing Company

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The Durham Fly Fishing Company

My name is Stuart, and my goal is to deliver exceptional fly fishing experiences that exceed your expectations. Whether you’re interested in guided trips, lessons, coaching, casting instruction, or general tips, I’m here to help.

I offer personalized services for corporate events, advanced anglers, or beginners eager to try fly fishing. My priority is ensuring you have a memorable and enjoyable time.

I understand hiring a guide or seeking advice can feel intimidating, but I provide a relaxed, friendly, and welcoming learning environment. My focus is on creating a positive, fun atmosphere where you can thrive and succeed in your fly fishing journey.

Every experience is tailored to your needs, designed to bring out your best.

The Durham Fly Fishing Company

Services Include:

  • Lake and river fishing
  • Tenkara fishing

Why Choose Us?

  • ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Rated by dozens of fly fishers
  • Friendly, bespoke, and professional service

Get in Touch with The Durham Fly Fishing Company
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She’s On The Fly

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She’s On The Fly
New Zealand

Nestled in the lush South Island of New Zealand, Aotearoa is an angler’s paradise. Its crystal-clear streams, framed by dramatic mountains and native forests, draw fishers worldwide. The thrill of spotting and catching trophy trout has long made this region a magnet for enthusiasts—dubbed "Angler’s El Dorado" by Zane Grey.

Renowned for its world-class Brown and Rainbow Trout fisheries, the South Island offers unparalleled fly-fishing. Here, the combination of trophy-sized fish and breathtaking landscapes creates some of the planet’s finest angling opportunities.

Comprehensive Access to Prime Fishing Waters
Based in Christchurch, at the heart of the South Island, we provide access to hundreds of kilometers of exceptional waterways. From Nelson’s sunlit vistas to the snow-capped Southern Alps and the rainforest-cloaked valleys of the West Coast, our expeditions traverse this untamed wilderness.

Renowned Kiwi Hospitality & Unforgettable Experiences
As New Zealanders, we pride ourselves on warm hospitality and crafting personalized fly-fishing adventures. Beyond world-class angling, New Zealand offers award-winning wines, gourmet cuisine, and year-round adventure tourism.

Join Hannah for an Extraordinary Fishing Adventure
Hannah, a professionally registered NZPFGA guide, is eager to lead your pursuit of elusive backcountry trout. With her expertise and your passion, this journey will become a highlight of your fly-fishing legacy.

Hundreds of kilometers of pristine waterways
World-class fly-fishing opportunities
Tailored angling experiences

Expertise in Target Species
She’s On The Fly specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Brown Trout
  • Rainbow Trout

She's On The Fly

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