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Fly Fishing for Halibut in Northern Norway
Norway | 51 min
Fly fishing in Norway’s wild saltwater landscapes presents the ultimate challenge: targeting elusive halibut on the fly.
Channel: Vision Fly Fishing
Video Summary
This captivating fly fishing adventure unfolds in Norway’s stunning wilderness, home to some of Europe’s most exhilarating fishing opportunities. The goal? Landing halibut—a formidable and highly prized catch in these cold waters. Set against a breathtaking backdrop described as the "top of the world," the expedition offers a unique thrill.
The journey leads to a remote island with over a thousand trout lakes, but the anglers’ focus is solely on halibut. The challenge? Catching these massive fish with a fly rod—a feat never before attempted. Anticipation builds as they prepare for this unprecedented pursuit, aiming to hook the largest halibut possible.
Guided by Daniel, a halibut expert unfamiliar with fly fishing, the team navigates uncharted territory. Together, they refine tactics—adjusting boat drift, depth, and technique—highlighting the skill and adaptability required.
Throughout the video, the anglers experiment with strategies, adapting to halibut behavior and shifting conditions. They explore diverse areas of the island, each presenting new challenges and opportunities. The footage captures thrilling moments: close encounters, heart-pounding strikes, and the bittersweet sting of missed chances.
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Fliegenfischerschule Ebert
Germany
As a certified FFI/EFFA fly-casting instructor, Peter Ebert brings extensive knowledge and experience to his fly-fishing seminars and courses, tailored to all skill levels and interests.
Starter Courses
Ideal for beginners or those refining foundational skills, these courses cover fly-fishing essentials—from casting techniques to fly selection.
Advanced Courses
Designed for anglers who have mastered the basics and seek to elevate their skills.
Private Guiding & Personal Training
For a personalized experience, Peter offers one-on-one sessions to address your specific goals and needs.
Predator Courses
Learn to effectively target predatory fish species with specialized fly-fishing techniques.
Workshops & Lessons
- Predator fly-fishing workshops and guiding
- Spey casting lessons
Expertise in Target Species
Fliegenfischerschule Ebert specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown Trout
- Grayling
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
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Thierry Millot
France
Recognized as "Guide of the Year" by the renowned fishing magazine Pêches Sportives, Thierry has perfected his craft since 1975. Specializing in French nymphing, he has taught enthusiasts and led guided trips since 1998.
Expert Certification & Experience
Thierry holds a French national diploma certifying him as a professional fly fishing guide and instructor. With extensive experience in the rivers and lakes of Haute Loire, Ardèche, and Puy de Dome, he has also fished annually in Croatia, Bosnia, Slovenia, Sweden, and Wales since the late 1990s.
Tailored Fly Fishing Adventures
Your guided experience will take you to prime fishing locations, where you can target brown trout, grayling, and rainbow trout. Personalized courses are available to help you master or refine fly fishing techniques.
Harmony & Serenity
We prioritize a peaceful and harmonious atmosphere tailored to your needs. Day trips in France accommodate 1–2 anglers, while European adventures welcome small groups of 3–4.
- 5,000 km of trout rivers accessible
- Fly tier since 1975
- Guided trips range from individual to customized family experiences
Expertise by Species
Thierry Millot specializes in fly fishing for:
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Yves Faillenet | France
Achieve rapid progress and reach your fishing goals with a qualified, experienced guide. Explore stunning fishing spots on rivers, lakes, and ponds.
Full equipment is provided and included in the service, along with transfers to fishing locations in a suitable vehicle.
Learn specialized techniques from your instructor:
- Fly fishing courses for all levels
- Trout lure fishing courses
- Nymph (natural bait) trout fishing courses
- Predator lure or streamer (fly) fishing courses
- Workshops and guided sessions for beginners to experts
Introductory Fly Fishing Workshop
For newcomers, this workshop covers:
- Equipment overview
- Basic casting techniques
- Fly targeting and placement
- Leader setup, knots, and connections
- Presentation methods (upstream, cross-stream, downstream)
- Approach strategies
- Entomology basics (insect study)
- Essential fly patterns
Advanced Training
For experienced anglers, refine your knowledge and technique through a blend of theory and hands-on practice.
Additional Offerings
- Fly-tying courses
- Decades of experience across dozens of scenic locations
Target Species Expertise
Yves Faillenet specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Pike
- Grayling
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Les Sens de la Rivière
France
At the heart of Les Sens de la Rivière lies a mission to reconnect people with nature. The project’s name, rich with meaning, invites fly fishers to immerse themselves fully in their surroundings and sharpen their senses in pursuit of the perfect catch.
Exploring Hidden Gems: Reunion Island and Verdon Canyon
Whether you’re drawn to Reunion Island’s tropical charm or the rugged splendor of Verdon Canyon, I’ll guide you through these untouched landscapes. With deep knowledge of both regions, I’ll share hidden spots and firsthand insights to help you experience their raw beauty.
Certified Guidance for Mastering Fly Fishing
As a certified fly fishing instructor, I teach a full range of techniques—from dry fly, nymph, and wet fly to streamer fishing—as well as strategies for new waters, blind fishing, sight fishing, and euro nymphing. My expertise spans both freshwater and saltwater environments. Whatever your goals, I’ll tailor my guidance to elevate your skills.
Expertise in Targeting These Species
Les Sens de la Rivière specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown Trout
- Chub
- Grayling
- Rainbow Trout
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Yoann Esquis
France
Fly Fishing Technique: From Beginner to Master
To accelerate your learning and deepen your understanding of aquatic environments and target species, consider hiring a fly fishing guide instructor. Master various casting techniques tailored to the fish’s position.
Customize your experience with a 1- to 5-day course based on your skill level and goals. Fish in rivers or reservoirs—your choice.
You’ll receive the same high-quality training used to certify future guide instructors, taught by me alongside Jan Astier—former coach of the French team and creator of the 6-level Linear Casting Technique.
Equipment-Specific Workshops
Personalized workshops focus on your gear, such as:
- Casting techniques optimized for your rod’s action.
- Leader selection based on your preferred method.
- And more.
Target Species
Primary targets include:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
- Chub
Explore Small Streams and Scenic Rivers
- Workshops tailored to your rods.
- Target brown trout, rainbow trout, and chub.
Expert Guidance for Key Species
Yoann Esquis specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Chub
- Rainbow trout
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