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Yoann Esquis
France
Fly Fishing Technique: From Beginner to Master
To accelerate your learning and deepen your understanding of aquatic environments and target species, consider hiring a fly fishing guide instructor. Master various casting techniques tailored to the fish’s position.
Customize your experience with a 1- to 5-day course based on your skill level and goals. Fish in rivers or reservoirs—your choice.
You’ll receive the same high-quality training used to certify future guide instructors, taught by me alongside Jan Astier—former coach of the French team and creator of the 6-level Linear Casting Technique.
Equipment-Specific Workshops
Personalized workshops focus on your gear, such as:
- Casting techniques optimized for your rod’s action.
- Leader selection based on your preferred method.
- And more.
Target Species
Primary targets include:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
- Chub
Explore Small Streams and Scenic Rivers
- Workshops tailored to your rods.
- Target brown trout, rainbow trout, and chub.
Expert Guidance for Key Species
Yoann Esquis specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Chub
- Rainbow trout
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