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Brendan Shields
New Zealand
Greetings! I’m Brendan Shields, a passionate fly fishing guide based in Gore. As a proud member of the New Zealand Professional Fishing Guide Association, I uphold the highest standards of professionalism to deliver exceptional guiding experiences.
Expert Knowledge of Rivers and Seasons
With deep expertise in local rivers and seasonal patterns—including fly life and the feeding habits of wild Brown and Rainbow trout—I’ll guide you to prime fishing spots for unforgettable encounters.
Creating Memorable Experiences
My goal is to craft a day you’ll cherish, where you can relax and immerse yourself in the breathtaking habitats of Brown trout. Whether refining casting techniques or learning New Zealand stream craft, I’ll tailor the experience to your skill level and goals.
Mastering the Art of Approaching Wild Browns
Success in New Zealand’s waters hinges on understanding how to approach wary wild Browns. I’ll share proven techniques to maximize your chances of a rewarding catch.
Diverse Fishing Adventures
Southland offers an array of thrilling options: mountain-fed freestone rivers, spring creeks, alluvial rivers, bush-clad streams, and serene lakes. My in-depth knowledge ensures an exciting fly fishing adventure in locations teeming with active trout.
Convenient Access
Lowland rivers are just 30–40 minutes from Gore, while backcountry spots require only 1–2 hours of travel, providing easy access to diverse fishing grounds.
Key Strengths
- Deep understanding of river ecosystems and seasonal dynamics
- Expertise across lakes, spring creeks, and more
- Guided trips for all skill levels
Target Species
Brendan Shields specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
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- Conciseness: Removed redundant phrases (e.g., "high standard of" → "highest standards").
- Clarity: Simplified complex sentences (e.g., "develop your skill level and cater to your specific needs" → "tailor the experience to your skill level and goals").
- Flow: Reorganized bullet points for logical progression.
- Grammar/Consistency: Fixed minor errors (e.g., "Greetings" typo, hyphenation in "bush-clad").
- Engagement: Strengthened active voice (e.g., "I guarantee" → "ensures").
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