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River Pike Fishing on Unknown Waters – Sweden
25 min
Chasing pike on the fly in one of Sweden’s largest rivers.
Channel: Vision Fly Fishing
Video Summary
This fly fishing video follows two friends, Nicholas Bauer and his companion, as they explore a new tailwater below a power plant. They share their tactics for fishing unfamiliar waters, highlighting the excitement and challenges of discovery.
Initially unsure if pike inhabit the area, they remain optimistic. They target grassy zones near deep channels, where pike often lurk. The sunny, warm weather creates ideal conditions for their expedition.
Throughout the day, they experiment with techniques like heavy flies for deep fishing and adapt to the river’s conditions. They also reflect on the power plant’s environmental impact—the river was once a salmon run.
Their persistence pays off: they land several pike, including an aggressive one that strikes their fly head-on. This success showcases their adaptability and skill. They employ weedless flies and heavy tackle to handle diverse challenges.
The video also provides educational insights, such as tips for deep-water fishing and using different flies and lines. The anglers stress patience and proper technique for success in deep waters.
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Fly Fishers Italy
Fly Fishers Italy elevates La Dolce Vita with decades of experience fishing Italy’s pristine streams.
We offer guided trips in Valtellina and the trout-rich waters of Sondrio Province, as well as the Sant’Antonio Valleys in Val Camonica (Corteno Golgi, Brescia Province).
These valleys—nestled along the eastern edge of the Bergamo Alps—feature some of Italy’s most breathtaking, unspoiled landscapes. We’ve handpicked the finest river stretches for fly-fishing enthusiasts.
Why Choose Us?
- One of the few global providers of marble trout fishing.
- Access to hundreds of kilometers of untouched mountain streams.
- Decades of fly-fishing expertise.
- Fluent in English and Italian.
Target Species Expertise
Fly Fishers Italy specializes in:
- Arctic Char
- Brown Trout
- Grayling
- Rainbow Trout
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Steef Meijers
The Netherlands
With over 30 years of experience in fishing, Steef Meijers is a versatile angler who has explored countless waters across the Netherlands. A fly-fishing expert, he possesses extensive knowledge of the country’s diverse fishing spots. If you’re interested in fly fishing for predatory species like pike, pike-perch, and bass in the Netherlands, Steef’s deep expertise makes him the perfect guide.
- Speaks Dutch (native) and English (fluent)
- 30 years of experience
- Predatory fish specialist
Expertise in Target Species
Steef Meijers specializes in fly fishing for the following species:
- Asp
- Common Carp
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
- Sea Bass
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RIVEO
Belgium
From beginners to pros, and half-day to full-day guided trips, we offer the chance to fly fish on the stunning Ourthe River.
Fly Fish the Beautiful Ourthe River
Beyond fly fishing, RIVEO provides a variety of family-friendly activities along the river.
Expert Guidance for These Species
RIVEO specializes in fly fishing for:
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Fly Fishing in Zillertal, Austria
With its pristine mountain rivers and breathtaking landscapes, Austria is an ideal destination for fly fishing. We offer guided trips to the most scenic spots in Tyrol, or you can venture out independently after receiving the necessary information.
Our packages include:
- Standalone fishing permits
- Guided tours (with permits and your own gear)
- Belly boat fishing options
- All-inclusive experiences with equipment rentals, wading boots, and permits
Explore Tyrol’s Best Fly Fishing Spots
- Choose guided tours or solo adventures
- Try belly boat fishing
Expert Guidance for Target Species
At Fly Fishing Zillertal, we specialize in catching:
- Brook trout
- Brown trout
- Grayling
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
- Rainbow trout
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