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10-Day Fly Fishing Expedition in Colorado, USA
Runtime: 84 minutes
Four friends embark on a 10-day fly-fishing adventure in Colorado—a state none of them have fished before.
Channel: Wild Fly Productions
Video Summary
The video follows four friends on a unique fly-fishing journey. Their adventure begins with converting a bus into a mobile base, enabling them to explore remote fishing spots independently. With no backup vehicle, they rely entirely on the bus, adding an element of self-reliance and unpredictability.
As they travel through Colorado, they encounter diverse fishing conditions and species, along with challenges like mechanical issues and tough catches. Despite these hurdles, their enthusiasm never wanes. The trip highlights not just fishing but also camaraderie, adventure, and the freedom of life on the road.
Stripped of daily stressors, they embrace simplicity, bonding over shared experiences and the joy of immersing themselves in nature.
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Steve Cullen Fly Fishing
"Only the heart can truly appreciate the world’s finest and most breathtaking wonders—they transcend sight and touch."
Fly fishing is a captivating art that connects us with nature’s grandeur in the most fulfilling way. More than just a sport, it offers a peaceful escape from daily stresses, making it an invaluable retreat.
This simple yet profound pursuit has enthralled millions worldwide, creating lifelong devotees. Through this platform, I hope to share my passion and inspire others to discover fly fishing’s magic, just as I have.
Guidance and Instruction
I offer expert guidance at premier locations, including:
Midland Reservoirs:
- Rutland Water
- Grafham Water
- Pitsford Water
- Ravensthorpe
- Draycote Water
Derbyshire Rivers:
- River Derwent
- River Wye
- River Dove
- River Lathkill
Plus the Welsh River Dee and renowned Southern chalkstreams.
I specialize in diverse fly fishing techniques, providing up-to-date, practical advice to help you grow as an angler. If you have a specific location in mind, contact me—I’ll do my best to accommodate your needs. Whether stillwaters, reservoirs, or rivers, I’ll guide you to maximize your success.
- Fish stunning reservoirs and rivers
- Flies hand-tied by Steve available
- Experience legendary chalk streams
Get in touch with Steve Cullen Fly Fishing today!
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Southern Rivers Fly Fishing
New Zealand
At Southern Rivers Fly Fishing, we pride ourselves on crafting unforgettable experiences that stay with our clients long after their trip ends. We cater to diverse anglers and adapt seamlessly to New Zealand’s ever-changing outdoor conditions. If needed, we provide flexible alternatives while maintaining clear communication to align with your preferences.
Our mission is to introduce people to the outdoor lifestyle and art of fly fishing with ease. Our skilled, knowledgeable guides foster a friendly and relaxed atmosphere, prioritizing safety, reliability, flexibility, and trust.
Meet Jake Berry
A Wanaka native from the lower South Island, Jake Berry grew up surrounded by seasoned outdoorsmen. From childhood, he dreamed of becoming a professional fly fishing and hunting guide—a dream he pursued with unwavering dedication.
Over 20 years, Jake has honed his expertise, now serving as the owner and lead guide of Southern Rivers Fly Fishing. His passion for the wilderness and pursuit of New Zealand’s wild trout shines through in his work, delivering unparalleled fishing adventures.
- Two highly experienced guides
- Single or multi-day trips available
- Fly fish amidst New Zealand’s breathtaking landscapes
Expertise in These Species
Southern Rivers Fly Fishing specializes in targeting:
- Brown Trout
- Rainbow Trout
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Upstream Fly Fishing
Switzerland
Greetings, I’m Pascal Zeller. My deep passion for fly fishing has become my profession. Based near Interlaken, nestled in the breathtaking Swiss Alps, I operate in a region renowned for its stunning landscapes and diverse waterways.
Switzerland’s Allure
Our picturesque country captivates visitors worldwide with its natural beauty. Switzerland boasts an abundance of pristine waters—crystal-clear rivers, deep lakes, and secluded mountain streams—making it a paradise for anglers. A common question is: Does Switzerland offer fly fishing opportunities? The answer is a resounding yes! With diverse options for all skill levels, Switzerland’s fly fishing scene is exceptional.
Guided Fly Fishing Services
I offer guided fly fishing tours across Switzerland’s immaculate waters. Whether you seek high-altitude alpine trout, pike in our abundant lakes, or the challenge of barbel (the "freshwater bonefish") with deep nymphs, there’s something for everyone. Dry-fly chub fishing is another thrilling option.
About Upstreamflyfishing
Founded in 1998, Upstreamflyfishing was among Switzerland’s first fishing outfitters. Today, we cater to both beginners and seasoned anglers with a range of tailored services.
Our Services
- Fly fishing lessons for beginners
- Corporate/group fishing events for team bonding
- Guided expeditions across Switzerland for experienced anglers
Experiences to Enjoy
- Alpine trout fishing
- Pike fly fishing in Swiss lakes
- Barbel and chub fishing
- Beginner-friendly lessons
- Group/company fishing events
Target Species Expertise
Upstream Fly Fishing specializes in:
- Barbel
- Brown Trout
- Chub
- Grayling
- Pike
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Brendan Shields
New Zealand
Greetings! I’m Brendan Shields, a passionate fly fishing guide based in Gore. As a proud member of the New Zealand Professional Fishing Guide Association, I uphold the highest standards of professionalism to deliver exceptional guiding experiences.
Expert Knowledge of Rivers and Seasons
With deep expertise in local rivers and seasonal patterns—including fly life and the feeding habits of wild Brown and Rainbow trout—I’ll guide you to prime fishing spots for unforgettable encounters.
Creating Memorable Experiences
My goal is to craft a day you’ll cherish, where you can relax and immerse yourself in the breathtaking habitats of Brown trout. Whether refining casting techniques or learning New Zealand stream craft, I’ll tailor the experience to your skill level and goals.
Mastering the Art of Approaching Wild Browns
Success in New Zealand’s waters hinges on understanding how to approach wary wild Browns. I’ll share proven techniques to maximize your chances of a rewarding catch.
Diverse Fishing Adventures
Southland offers an array of thrilling options: mountain-fed freestone rivers, spring creeks, alluvial rivers, bush-clad streams, and serene lakes. My in-depth knowledge ensures an exciting fly fishing adventure in locations teeming with active trout.
Convenient Access
Lowland rivers are just 30–40 minutes from Gore, while backcountry spots require only 1–2 hours of travel, providing easy access to diverse fishing grounds.
Key Strengths
- Deep understanding of river ecosystems and seasonal dynamics
- Expertise across lakes, spring creeks, and more
- Guided trips for all skill levels
Target Species
Brendan Shields specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brown trout
- Rainbow trout
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