Yoann Esquis

Wandering Angler: A Backpack Fly Fishing Odyssey Through Shenandoah

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Backpack Fly Fishing in the Shenandoah Wilderness
United States → Virginia | 48 min

Three friends embark on a backpacking trip into Shenandoah National Park to fulfill a lifelong dream: learning to fly fish in the backcountry.

Channel: Jackson Miller

Video Summary:
The narrator opens by reflecting on his early inspiration from the film A River Runs Through It, describing fly fishing not just as a sport but as a profound connection to nature and spirituality. The video follows his journey—from his first attempts to his learning experiences in the wild waters of the Blue Ridge Mountains, shared with close friends.

Stunning scenes of mountain streams alternate with the challenges of reading water and the thrill of pursuing native trout. Fly fishing is portrayed as an art form, demanding both ecological understanding and a lifetime of mastery.

The adventure leads the group into Shenandoah National Park, highlighting the wilderness’s beauty and serenity. Despite setbacks like harsh weather and beginner errors, their determination and joy shine through.


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Captain Ethan Kiburz

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Captain Ethan Kiburz
Captain Ethan is a seasoned fly fishing guide specializing in the flats of Tampa Bay, Clearwater Beach, St. Pete Beach, and Dunedin. A native of Safety Harbor, he expertly navigates Tampa Bay and the Pinellas Peninsula, ensuring an unforgettable fishing experience regardless of Florida’s unpredictable weather.

Tampa Bay’s Bounty
Tampa Bay and its surrounding waters offer exceptional fly fishing opportunities. Whether pursuing Tarpon off the beaches, targeting Snook in the backwaters, or poling the flats for Redfish, this region delivers unparalleled excitement.

The Allure of Tarpon
Fly fishing for Tarpon is often considered the pinnacle of angling. The thrill lies not only in the Tarpon’s acrobatics and fierce fight but also in the intricate teamwork between guide and angler. Captain Ethan emphasizes patience, persistence, and collaboration—key to landing these majestic fish, which migrate in large numbers when water temperatures range between 72°F and 78°F.

Essential Gear
Boat positioning is critical when targeting Tarpon. Fly rods for larger specimens should be 10-12 weight, paired with robust reels featuring large arbors and smooth drag systems to withstand the Tarpon’s power. Fly line selection depends on preference, but understanding the options enhances the experience.

Crafting the Perfect Leader
Leader construction is a debated topic among fly fishers. With evolving techniques, lighter bite sections are gaining popularity. Knowing the differences between monofilament and fluorocarbon—and tailoring your leader accordingly—can significantly improve success rates.

Captain Ethan Kiburz

Choosing Tarpon Flies
Selecting the right fly is both an art and a science. While personal preferences vary, understanding Tarpon’s keen vision helps. Captain Ethan prefers easily visible patterns like black and purple but stresses the importance of fly placement relative to the fish.

Seasonal Insights
Tampa Bay’s fishing opportunities shift with the seasons. Winter focuses on Redfish and Speckled Sea Trout, while spring brings a surge of species. Captain Ethan’s expertise ensures anglers maximize their chances of success year-round.

Services Offered

  • Inshore and night fly fishing
  • Full-day or half-day trips
  • Target species: Tarpon, Snook, Redfish, and more

Contact Captain Ethan Kiburz to book your adventure.


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We Fly Fish

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We Fly Fish

At We Fly Fish, we believe the best fly fishers are those who have the most fun. Our goal is to help you enjoy this wonderful sport to the fullest. Whether you’re a beginner testing the waters or an experienced angler honing new skills, we’ll help you reach your potential. We’ve even guided clients from their first cast to expert-level adventures at the world’s finest fly-fishing destinations.

Fly fishing demands an understanding of the ecosystem, keen observation, and stealth. Success requires full focus on what’s happening underwater—and we’ll teach you how. Many newcomers find the sport’s tranquility and the thrill of the chase an irresistible combination.

Unique Fly Fishing Locations

We offer more diverse fly-fishing experiences than any other provider. Our handpicked locations range from serene chalk rivers to wild moorland streams, small lakes to the country’s largest still waters. Some spots are exclusive to us, ensuring a truly special experience.

Many of our waters are designated SSSIs (Sites of Special Scientific Interest), protecting rare flora and fauna. Whether you’re a novice or an expert, we have the perfect adventure for you.

We Fly Fish is a Wild Trout Trust Trade Member

  • Family-friendly fishing days
  • Guided lessons for all skill levels
  • 26 exclusive UK locations
  • Chalkstream fly fishing

Get in touch with We Fly Fish


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Pilve Fly Fishing

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Pilve Fly Fishing
Finland

I am a 35-year-old fishing guide based in Pirkanmaa, specializing in fly fishing. With years of experience in both practice and instruction, I deeply understand the sport’s nuances. I hold a certified professional fishing guide qualification and am a member of the Finland Fishing Guide Guild. Additionally, I contribute fishing-related articles to publications like Nordic Fly Fisher magazine.

Partnerships

I partner with international companies, representing them in Finland as both a fly fisher and fly tier. My collaborations include English brands Veniard, Snowbee, and Fulling Mill, as well as the Italian company Stonfo.

Services Offered

Whether you’re a beginner eager to learn fly fishing or an experienced angler seeking to refine your skills, I’m happy to assist. My guiding services cover all aspects of fly fishing, including hands-on practice, theory, fly tying, fish biology, and more—helping you build expertise.

Ethical Practices

Respect for nature and fish is paramount in all fishing activities. I adhere strictly to local regulations, including quotas, restrictions, and etiquette toward fellow anglers. Pilve Fly Fishing enforces a zero-tolerance policy for alcohol and drugs to ensure everyone’s safety.

Services Available

  • Certified guiding
  • Workshops
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  • Fly tying

Expert Target Species

Pilve Fly Fishing specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Asp
  • Brook trout
  • Brown trout
  • Chub
  • Grayling
  • Ide
  • Perch
  • Rainbow trout

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Yoann Esquis

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Yoann Esquis
France

Fly Fishing Technique: From Beginner to Master

To accelerate your learning and deepen your understanding of aquatic environments and target species, consider hiring a fly fishing guide instructor. Master various casting techniques tailored to the fish’s position.

Customize your experience with a 1- to 5-day course based on your skill level and goals. Fish in rivers or reservoirs—your choice.

You’ll receive the same high-quality training used to certify future guide instructors, taught by me alongside Jan Astier—former coach of the French team and creator of the 6-level Linear Casting Technique.

Equipment-Specific Workshops
Personalized workshops focus on your gear, such as:

  • Casting techniques optimized for your rod’s action.
  • Leader selection based on your preferred method.
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  • And more.

Target Species
Primary targets include:

  • Brown trout
  • Rainbow trout
  • Chub

Explore Small Streams and Scenic Rivers

  • Workshops tailored to your rods.
  • Target brown trout, rainbow trout, and chub.

Expert Guidance for Key Species
Yoann Esquis specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Brown trout
  • Chub
  • Rainbow trout

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