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Wandering Angler: A Backpack Fly Fishing Odyssey Through Shenandoah

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Backpack Fly Fishing in the Shenandoah Wilderness
United States → Virginia | 48 min

Three friends embark on a backpacking trip into Shenandoah National Park to fulfill a lifelong dream: learning to fly fish in the backcountry.

Channel: Jackson Miller

Video Summary:
The narrator opens by reflecting on his early inspiration from the film A River Runs Through It, describing fly fishing not just as a sport but as a profound connection to nature and spirituality. The video follows his journey—from his first attempts to his learning experiences in the wild waters of the Blue Ridge Mountains, shared with close friends.

Stunning scenes of mountain streams alternate with the challenges of reading water and the thrill of pursuing native trout. Fly fishing is portrayed as an art form, demanding both ecological understanding and a lifetime of mastery.

The adventure leads the group into Shenandoah National Park, highlighting the wilderness’s beauty and serenity. Despite setbacks like harsh weather and beginner errors, their determination and joy shine through.


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Robfish

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Robfish


Robfish | New Zealand

Embark on an unforgettable fly fishing adventure with Rob Vaz, an accredited NZPGFA professional guide. A former NZ National Fly Fishing Champion and international representative, Rob brings decades of expertise to trout fishing expeditions in the Central North Island. Raised in the Waikato region, he has explored premier fly fishing locations across New Zealand and beyond.

With a competitive background representing New Zealand, Rob has mastered cutting-edge techniques to ensure a successful and rewarding experience for anglers of all levels. Whether you’re a beginner or an expert, he is committed to making your day on the water both enjoyable and educational. Let Rob—a distinguished member of the NZ Professional Guides Association—elevate your fly fishing journey.

Dive into Fly Fishing or Czech/Euro Nymphing

Under Rob’s guidance, you’ll learn the essentials of fly fishing or delve into Czech/Euro nymphing—a technique he pioneered long before it gained mainstream popularity. His deep immersion in European fly fishing, particularly Czech nymphing during the 1990s, made him one of its earliest adopters.

Though this method has been around for years, Rob is passionate about sharing its nuances with his clients. Not only does it increase your chances of landing fish, but it also adds an exciting new layer to your angling experience.

Why Choose Rob?

✔ Member of the NZ Professional Guides Association
✔ Czech/Euro Nymphing Specialist
✔ Expert Guide for Central North Island Waters


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Glendeer Guides: Your Passport to Extraordinary Journeys

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Glendeer Guides
New Zealand

Experience the thrill of fly fishing with professional guides in the stunning South Island of New Zealand. Choose from day tours to multi-day adventures for an unparalleled experience.

Exceptional Fly Fishing Conditions

Against a backdrop of breathtaking mountain landscapes and crystal-clear alpine rivers, our accredited guides ensure an unforgettable encounter with wild Brown and Rainbow trout.

Using a wide variety of baits—dry flies, terrestrial bugs, cicadas, hoppers, and spider imitations—we target trout in clear mountain streams. This is the pinnacle of New Zealand trout fly fishing, led by the best local guides.

Client Satisfaction & Enjoyment

Our commitment to excellence is reflected in our clients’ glowing feedback. At Glendeer, we guarantee a rewarding and enjoyable fly-fishing experience.

New Zealand: A Premier Fly Fishing Destination

Globally recognized as a top fly-fishing destination, New Zealand offers unmatched opportunities to catch wild Brown and Rainbow trout. Our trips cater to all skill levels, from seasoned anglers to beginners, including families and non-fishing companions.

Our Guided Fishing Trips

Glendeer provides professionally guided day trips, multi-day expeditions with camping or backcountry huts, and even luxury accommodations. Whether in headwater streams or spring-fed waters, our guides’ expertise ensures a world-class experience.

The Reputation of New Zealand’s Fly Fishing Guides

New Zealand is famed not only for its exceptional trout fishing but also for its highly skilled guides. Our reputation reflects the quality we deliver.

Glendeer Guides

Sight Fishing in Mountain Streams

  • Single-day to multi-day trips
  • A truly high-quality fly-fishing experience

Expertise in Target Species

Glendeer specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Brown trout
  • Rainbow trout

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Evening Rise Fly Fishing

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Evening Rise Fly Fishing
New Zealand

Welcome to an unforgettable fly fishing adventure in the heart of New Zealand’s Southland and Otago regions! I’m Mike Dennis, and I take great pride in showcasing the exceptional freshwater fishing opportunities here. Whether you’re looking for a short angling escape, a peaceful day on the water, or a multi-day expedition, I’ll tailor your trip to create memories that last a lifetime.

Meet Your Expert Guide

I’m Mike Dennis, a true New Zealander who fell in love with fly fishing at the age of 10. My journey began with catching eels by handline and the thrill of landing my first trout on a fly rod. Since then, my passion has taken me across New Zealand’s two main islands, the Cook Islands, Southeast Asia, Australia, and Canada’s Pacific Northwest. With 25 years of guiding experience in Southland (New Zealand’s Home of Brown Trout) and Otago, I’ve developed an intimate knowledge of these waters and their fish.

A Passion for Teaching

Beyond guiding, I love teaching fly fishing to anglers of all levels. Whether it’s setting up gear, mastering knots, refining casting techniques, or choosing the perfect fly, I’m here to share my expertise. From beginners to seasoned anglers looking to sharpen their skills, I cater to everyone. Join me for a day of fun, stunning scenery, crystal-clear water, and the excitement of sight-fishing rising trout.

Embark on a Unique Adventure

Let me introduce you to fly fishing for New Zealand’s spectacular brown trout. For an extra thrill, we can explore night fishing along lake edges and stream mouths. Imagine casting a mouse pattern (season permitting) or a streamer fly under a starry sky—this is when the "big boys" come out to play, where trophy trout lurk.

Your Safety Comes First

Evening Rise Fly Fishing

When you fish with me, you’re in safe hands. I hold a First Aid Field Qualification and serve as an Operational Team Member of Search and Rescue, backed by years of outdoor experience. I’m also a proud member of the New Zealand Professional Fishing Guides Association, ensuring I meet all industry standards for your peace of mind.

Book Your Fly Fishing Expedition

It’s time to discover New Zealand’s breathtaking lakes, rivers, and streams—and the magnificent trout that call them home. Contact me now to secure your spot and embark on an unforgettable journey. Let’s make your angling dreams a reality!

  • Lakes, rivers, and streams available
  • Adventurous night fly fishing available
  • Guiding and tuition for all levels

Expert Advice for These Species

Evening Rise Fly Fishing specializes in:

  • Brown trout
  • Rainbow trout

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She’s On The Fly

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She’s On The Fly
New Zealand

Nestled in the lush South Island of New Zealand, Aotearoa is an angler’s paradise. Its crystal-clear streams, framed by dramatic mountains and native forests, draw fishers worldwide. The thrill of spotting and catching trophy trout has long made this region a magnet for enthusiasts—dubbed "Angler’s El Dorado" by Zane Grey.

Renowned for its world-class Brown and Rainbow Trout fisheries, the South Island offers unparalleled fly-fishing. Here, the combination of trophy-sized fish and breathtaking landscapes creates some of the planet’s finest angling opportunities.

Comprehensive Access to Prime Fishing Waters
Based in Christchurch, at the heart of the South Island, we provide access to hundreds of kilometers of exceptional waterways. From Nelson’s sunlit vistas to the snow-capped Southern Alps and the rainforest-cloaked valleys of the West Coast, our expeditions traverse this untamed wilderness.

Renowned Kiwi Hospitality & Unforgettable Experiences
As New Zealanders, we pride ourselves on warm hospitality and crafting personalized fly-fishing adventures. Beyond world-class angling, New Zealand offers award-winning wines, gourmet cuisine, and year-round adventure tourism.

Join Hannah for an Extraordinary Fishing Adventure
Hannah, a professionally registered NZPFGA guide, is eager to lead your pursuit of elusive backcountry trout. With her expertise and your passion, this journey will become a highlight of your fly-fishing legacy.

Hundreds of kilometers of pristine waterways
World-class fly-fishing opportunities
Tailored angling experiences

Expertise in Target Species
She’s On The Fly specializes in fly fishing for:

  • Brown Trout
  • Rainbow Trout

She's On The Fly

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