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Fly Fishing with Heart
Austria
Looking to break away from your usual weekend routine? Share your interests with us, and we’ll tailor a program to match your preferences. Our multi-day fly fishing courses feature attractive group packages, making club outings, group lessons, corporate incentives, or friend getaways both accessible and memorable. We can’t wait to spend time with you by the water, offering an unforgettable experience in the pristine natural parks of Karwendel or Steinberg am Rofan—where you’ll enjoy exceptional fly fishing amid wild trout habitats.
Multi-day courses and group packages available
Stunning landscapes and pristine waters
Expert Guidance for These Species
Fly Fishing with Heart specializes in fly fishing for:
- Brook trout
- Brown trout
- Grayling
- Perch
- Pike
- Pike-perch
- Rainbow trout
- Sea trout
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